Inside of Me

By Angst Queen

You have caused me nothing but pain
Tell me now
What did you gain?
I look at you with dark, lifeless eyes
Wishing nothing but my demise
You don't care
And others only stare
I hate the world
And you
I wish for you to die too
A slow, tortured, painful death
I want to hear you scream till your last breath
You took everything away from me
All your fault
You just didn't see
I loved you once upon a time
Until you dropped me like a dime
I no longer care
Because its over
You now lie dead in blood stained clover
I turn away, pride and malice in my eyes
I brought about your demise
Its too bad
You didn't see
The blood thirsty beast inside of me

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Copyright 2004 BloodRoseWolf
Published on Friday, February 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • empty_love On Thursday, April 21, 2005, empty_love (15)By person wrote:

    wow, theres a lot of emotion in that, very nice write.

  • A former member wrote: wow *someone* did something bad.. i have felt emotions like this but i doubt i could ever make them sound like THIS in a million years wonderful work -ariel

  • A former member wrote: i love this write! wow!

  • A former member wrote: Dropped me like a dime. You now lie dead in blood stained clover. These are my favorite lines here. I should read this again. Over & over. ~Shane~

  • Solace On Friday, February 6, 2004, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    lol this was great! you dropped me like a dime, blood stained clover so many cool lines!

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