Pain

By Angst Queen

I feel nothing but pain
My body numb as I walk through the rain
Pain was all you ever brung me
Pain is now all I can see
My eyes are a black, lifeless void
I am lost in the pain in you
Not knowing what to do
You never cared
I see that now
I was a fool
Your little tool
You ripped my heart in two
Pain was all I got from you
Pain is all I am
And pain is how I shall die
Underneath a blood red sky

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Copyright 2004 BloodRoseWolf
Published on Friday, February 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • SilverPagan On Sunday, May 1, 2005, SilverPagan (24)By person wrote:

    Short and sweet.

  • A former member wrote: this was a good write!

  • A former member wrote: Painful but good. Every day should be spend under a blood red sky... Thanx! ~Shane~

  • A former member wrote: Yeah I thought that 2. Same as Expired.

  • A former member wrote: wouldn't it be brought??? love the blood red sky...nice job

  • Solace On Friday, February 6, 2004, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    Pain was all you ever BRANG me... This was good, excellent ending brang it home beautifully, neath a blood red sky *sighs in content*

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