THE RAPIST
By Jaded Jezzabelle
Barrier
road block
Great
wall of china
tension
mounts
thru
silence
builds
by the second
unsliceable
unable
to
penetrate
energy
BOUND BY SHIFTS
in
atmosphere
any
where
but
here
caught
adrift
by
tears
paralyzing
fear
of
being
ALONE IN THE END
hearts
travel solo
remain
UNMENDED
not
what
I
INTENDED
point in life
DEPENDED
no one
independent
with words
EVENTS
one
night
F
A
L
L
S
desolves
CO
dependent
SUBSEQUIENT
occurences
follow
recipe
for
BREAKING
D
O
W
N
successfuly
we interrupt
this
program
to bring you
.
.
.
.
this
special report
from
no place
for
a
child
EVENTS
reported
as they take place
in
full color detail
WALLS
Great Barrier Reef
stonehenge
insurmountable
ISSUES
speculations
mis use
position
of
authority
majority
rules fools
ADAPTATIONS
resperations
deep
in out
B R E A T H
leave
mass
of
clay footed
chains
projection
astrial
isolated freedom
of
movement
to
far reaching
corners
of
mind
to
find
myself
in
peace
pices
ENDING SUSTAINED
unforseen
damage
undiagnosed
A F F L I C T I O N
inexcsable
addiction
ravage
character
analysis
therapist
THERAPIST
THE RAPIST
Comments on "THE RAPIST"
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A former member wrote:
wow yeah therapist like a the rapist thats very clever and oh so true thats really cool how u did that
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On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
this was excellent! Wonderful format, with real power in the wording... Love it! purr
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On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
read aloud this was meant to be... an ever excellerating stream of conciousness like an avalanche falling on your head
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On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
YES!!!!!welcome to my world
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A former member wrote:
Whoa, Jaded, this is so damn clever! Totally correct about shrinks. I love the way the idea and structure of this poem are so unique. You speak so true and sincerely... Wow. ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, sweetambrosia
(80) wrote:
love the setup of this poem and the disjointedness, it really adds to the feeling. Good job! --sweets
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On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
but do you get it.....therapist....as in doctor....The Rapist....every time i go see a shrink i feel as if ive been raped
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On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
therapist...the rapist
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On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, sweetambrosia
(80) wrote:
yes I get it, I think it is an awesome piece of work.
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On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
thanks... im on one today...sorry...jaded