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It had to be you.
By Exodus
Eh.....I know its not my best....but It was one of those...spur of the
moment type things...I hope you enjoy!
Here it goes again
That feeling
That questions my faith
I’m everything right and wrong
I’m not suppose to fall
Not with you
But you lure me in,
Every time I come too close
Just one word, or whisper
Sends me shaking, my heart beating
I don’t want to feel anything close
To being in love with you
And all the things that intrigue me
Of all the people I could take
One has me acting up in twisted ways
One has my heart to break
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Sunday, January 4, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "It had to be you."
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On Monday, January 12, 2004, stormtalk
(727)
wrote:
"I’m not suppose to fall" - the simplicity of this creates an interesting commentary on the idea of falling in love... it seems you're saying that falling in love is something that inherently causes harm...
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On Monday, January 12, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
"I don’t want to feel anything close/ To being in love with you" - why? Love is a risk... you risk great harm for great pleasure... no, not even pleasure, but whatever it is that is better than pleasure.
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On Monday, January 12, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Not all think it's a worthwhile gamble... but I think it is ;) As for the last stanza... it sounds like you're used to being the chooser as opposed to the chosen. But now, you have knowledge of both ends...
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On Monday, January 12, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
"I guess this is growing up," says the song running through my head!
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On Monday, January 12, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
*gasp* PIMP?....
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On Monday, January 12, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
"And all the things that intrigue me/ Of all the people I could take"... you pimp you.
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On Wednesday, January 7, 2004, Mr King
(547) wrote:
a vulnerable and genuine piece... very beautiful... Christ Vice loves you. Always.
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On Monday, January 5, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
it may not be your best but I love it...Im in a situation alot like this one right now and he just walked in the door..lol
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