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Come Sweet Unknown.
By Dancing_Monkey
I stand here to challenge;
Intolerant
In desire, come sweet eluminess fire
Years of hollow eyes, lack of fulfillment
A seaker of wisdom, whereby need of awareness
Clouds do gather, be they blackend or not
Life giving whines become to entangle
My prospering self, dwell;
Shivering, as I seek
To take a stand, firsthand
A life of illusions crave for yet another
This burdensome task I wielded;
Upon myself, a extinguished path.
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Copyright 2003 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Thursday, November 6, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Come Sweet Unknown."
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A former member wrote:
NiCe WrItE :) you're an artist :)
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A former member wrote:
this is ss deep and real. this doesn't semmed forced, awesome job
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A former member wrote:
Meaningfull!! well done!
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A former member wrote:
Unfulfilled desires can eat at our souls to the point where we wish even delusion to show us the way. Awsome write Peter. ~Ryan
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On Thursday, November 6, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518)
wrote:
!!!Urban!!! your such a fucking maniac. I realy like you for saying that. Shit I cant believe you just said that!!! Well I wont comment now. *jumping in Urbans boat* woot...there.. Tiger
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