Liz

By Cinn

No stop!
Listen to me for once,
Stop your blah blah blah fo once,
You are not the issue here,
I need to talk,
And you to listen,
Not the other way aound,
Enough of this!
Stop directing all conversation to you,
I need you to hear this,
I'm bursting into tears because of you,
But you don't get it,
You just keep going on and on,
Just stop!
I don't care right now,
This isn't about you,
This is about me,
For once let it ALL be about me,
But no,
You just keep rambling,
STOP STOP STOP
You're my best friend,
So do as I say,
Listen to me,
This is when I need you the most,
I'm trying to tell you something here,
So just pay attention to me,
You're not the center of my attention,
This is about me and you,
So listen up just this once,
Let me tell you what's wrong,
Just let me talk,
Without interuptions,
Just STOP allready,

I miss you,
You hear that?
I miss you allready,
We're best-friends and I never see you,
You're doing your new stuff,
Left the old comfy tennies behind,
Got new sparkly platforms now,
Just don't forget the tennies in your closet,
Just don't throw them away...
You say you miss me too,
If that's so then come and see me,
God knows I've tried to see you,
Now it's your turn,

Can you stop long enough?
Just long enough for that?
I'll get to 'I miss you',
Then you'll tell me how much,
YOU miss YOUR boyfriend,
STOP
I don't care about him,
This is about us,
Remember together forever?
Well do you?
Break that promise why don't ya,
Sure no problem,
I'm nothing but your best-friend,
Who wants nothing more than to be heard,
What do promises mean to me?
Nothing acording to you,
But don't worry about it,
I'm your best-friend,
I'll forgive you,
Sure will,
Just as soon as you...
SHUT UP AND LISTEN TO ME!

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Copyright 2003 Cinn
Published on Sunday, October 26, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Loserland On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    best friend break-ups are always emotionally PAINFUL...but few last the test of time

  • Exodus On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    Yep...I've been through that...some ppl miss the meaning of being best friends...some ppl just say it..like its nothing, and they treat it like a label, and not a real meaning, ya know?...good job!

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