to be replaced for love

By kissofdeath



Your name was once uttered through these lips
Now my lips utter the nothings you promised.
I'm not going to cry, shedding tears is not my style.
My heart still in tact,never another chance.
Making love, not fucking.
Touch so soft, chills sent through each electric sense.
Four play to fingers, lips to skin to breast to thighs.
Moments of anticipation waiting for the words.
Eyes rolled back up into my head, eyes closed for satisfaction.
biting lips, deep breathes, that turn into gasps as you touch the softest spots.
Tongue that slides, & glides, in and out down and around.
Tracing every curve and nerve with the strongest muscle int he body- the tongue.
Grasping, holding, gropping, caressing, slide your hands "yes you did" up through my breast, to my neck in my mouth, hed turning, love, driving me crazy.
hand to hand riding with every bounce of energy.
unwrap me like a gift. slow,careful,and adore.

No more will you be the one that will drive me to excitment with that sexual fantasy.
Dreams came and gone. Im on the list as only a conquered one.
to live with that will be a privelage.
as for you, no list will you bear the burden.
only the punishment of knowing you will never kiss, touch, or come close to my heart again.
live with it, read it.
enjoy my replacment, hope she's fullfilling enough.

I wasn't Not for you.
Your name is a lost promise.

*kiss*

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Copyright 2003 kissofdeath
Published on Wednesday, October 22, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i had to read it twice and take notes the second time (on the first part). sometimes the one who does the hurting ends up hurting the worst. great write. U.P.

  • The Fallen Angel On Sunday, October 26, 2003, The Fallen Angel (234)By person wrote:

    intense, with vivid deceptive imagery in this write. Your ex-lover doesn't know true talent when it's in front of his face+Fallen One+

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Friday, October 24, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    now that your best so far great write

  • A former member wrote: i am proud that your able to get over a man like that people must relize that a partner is just that, if u give them everything they expect everything, give them what they deserve and theyll love you for it thanks for the amzing write M.H.A.

  • OLd SouL On Wednesday, October 22, 2003, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    great freakin' job. Raw, sexual, powerful. You had my full attention all the way through.

  • Loserland On Wednesday, October 22, 2003, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    wow...that's the coolest way to tell someone off that i ever heard

  • A former member wrote: Hmm had to take a short break after the first section... then returned for the second. Hopefully whoever this is to reads this and smiles at the fist part and then is shamed by the second part. Nicely done. ~Urban Shipwreck

  • SilentStalker On Wednesday, October 22, 2003, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...you do have a way with words...I almost teared reading this...it's quite a painful one...you detailed it nicely...and believe me, you got your message across...*hugs*... -Darun Scholar

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