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A Childs Dead Eyes
By WinterGrave
gazing threw the window,
black deseration is what i see
a child's dead eyes are staring at me
dead eyes always stare
taunting, begging, pleading
moving to the window
i close the shutters
a misty dust rises from rotten wood
and piercing sounds i here
burning me
laughter, enjoying my pain.
run away,
seek to lose this illusion
but it holds fast,
i close my eyes,
dead eyes is what i see.
left now with only tainted memory's
the guilt inside me,
the pain has gotten the best of me,
thrusted back into the dark,
into eternity
a spiritual eclipse
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Copyright 2003 WinterGrave
Published on Tuesday, October 14, 2003.
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On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, MESUN
(230)
wrote:
i feel wrapped in this sensationable essence of torture. it was excellent how i saw it all through my eyes as i read it. beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
i couldnt finish reading it scarred me escpecially still being a child myself and it brought back so many memeries to me about what my father did to me and his girlfriend did to me.its good though
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A former member wrote:
This is perfect. Each line like a haunting whisper; I hear your words echo. You are sincerely a wonderful poet. ~ Rose.
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
this has nothing to do with murder, although the eyes i see are of a dead child.~~~Grave
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On Thursday, May 27, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
I have seen eyes when I close my own...I still do. Though I have never murdered anyone, You can never forget someone's eyes. You describe this terror beautifully, and I love this work...~Mikey
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A former member wrote:
From what I see of this poem, you brutally murdered the child and the memory, or even ghost, of it is haunting you to this day. Don't you hate when that happens? Excellent write and wonderful imagery! =-MO-=
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On Monday, November 17, 2003, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
this poem gave my the chill.....thats fucking awesome, oh yes thank you for your comments that you so kindly left me.....
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On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
This piece made me wonder the story behind it, but I created my own story to fit the words. Nice visuals.
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A former member wrote:
* Is speachless...
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On Monday, October 20, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
wow....and haunting...i like it i like it
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On Thursday, October 16, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
I feel a tortured soul here, constantly battling the ghosts of one's past. Well exececuted. XXkRYXX
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On Thursday, October 16, 2003, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
just read all your works. I like this one the best. The imagery is what caught me. Your works are good, just need a lil spell checkin'. Welcome.
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A former member wrote:
I like the use of eclipse, as well. Especially in context with the rest of the stanza... Almost sounds like the protagonist is having a momentary lapse in happiness, but it feels like an eternity.
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On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, Silver Spectre
(90) wrote:
Dead eyes that taunt beg and plead...hmmm... The great thing about eclipses is they are momentary.. I like the direction you took on this in as far as where the charactor is.and , to me, the use of eclipse still shows hope as it is not permanent~Silver
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On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
i never thought of that, eclispses or momentary, well, i guess it still works with the poem, thank you for pointing that out.
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On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, Silver Spectre
(90) wrote:
maybe subconcious...*gives a yoda hmmmmmmmmm..
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