Car Crash Rhetoric

By Queazenart

I swear to God we're the same
Splatters on a windshield
Lost every vertebrae
Remains after the force of the impact
I'm a mess

You're in a wreckage somewhere
I'm the wreckage that you left here
That's so forgettable

I swear to God we're the same
Bodies in pieces
Stains on the seat
What's left of a dead end relationship
I'm a mess

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Copyright 2021 Queazenart
Published on Sunday, May 23, 2021.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

circa 2015
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  • RoseTheBrokenHearted On Wednesday, August 4, 2021, RoseTheBrokenHearted (129)By person wrote:

    I got choked up with the lines "I'm the wreckage that you left here, that's so forgettable." This piece was beautiful and painful all the same. Thank you -RTBH

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, May 24, 2021, TropicalSnowstorm (1608)By person wrote:

    Nice imagery and creative symbolism for the topic. Great piece! Ciao, T/S Scholar

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