There is death waiting for me

By WinterGrave

Wistful smoke
fluttering in wait
converging from nothing
poisoning me
making it hard for me to breath.

holding tight to sanity
the mist has gotten the best of me
puting pressure on my head
tighter and tighter.

uncontrolable, the memorys flash by
wish to seperate
chaind to the flesh
cant quite get free

floting here
seeking eternal sleep
passing roads already crossed
lost track
lost all sence of time
looking for a sing
to lead the way
seeking a death
for deaths is waiting for me.

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Published on Wednesday, October 8, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "There is death waiting for me"

On Tuesday, December 13, 2005, LordBrosnian (44) wrote:

I like the first stanza
On Monday, September 12, 2005, Midnight Phoenix (240) wrote:

Ooooooooooooooh.. Well put. You led us by your fingertips and sent us away.
On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175) wrote:

Death is waitng for all of us..-fairy-
On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340) wrote:

a very despairing piece with a great flow....-l-
On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (240) wrote:

We're all waiting in line for death.. Want heads?
A former member wrote: its sounds like death is coming sooner than you think. its like it will be here in the morning, and it will greet u when u awake. good write
A former member wrote: hmm.. this was intriguing.
On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, darkvamptress (16) wrote:

nice write it made me think i hope you keep write really good write truly mistress
A former member wrote: Wow, I'm impressed. Dfinitly,you're a poet to watch out for... *Lilith*
On Friday, October 17, 2003, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

most intoxicating, your prose is practiced and falls well up0n my ears........well done...urban
A former member wrote: Hey, thanks for commenting on my poem. It made me feel like I was supported and in away made me feel stronger. Your poems are also very well done.
On Thursday, October 16, 2003, Crystal Passion (221) wrote:

Such a sadness here. The first stanza is quite interesting, almost sounds as if death is not to far away, but by the end it seems that death is merely playing hide and go seek... could be wrong? ex write XXkRYzXX