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Ugly Goodbyes
By RoseTheBrokenHearted
My head burns,
My heart yearns;
My world turns.
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Slowly
I fight the tears,
Bury the fears;
Remember the years
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Always.
Beautiful dreams,
Never what it seems;
Dwelling crimson screams
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Constant.
Sad eyes,
Lovely butterflies;
Ugly goodbyes
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.
Again.
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Copyright 2019 RoseTheBrokenHearted
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On Sunday, July 14, 2019, VERITAS OMOIKANE
(23)
wrote:
goodbyes are verbal daggers to our identities. tattooing scars over our conscious, indifferent of who we are or who we think we are. it comes in the form of heartbreak and regrets. very well written. thank for you sharing. i appreciate you.
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A former member wrote:
This was a lingering, lovely, sorrowful write. The format you used to write it, leaving the proper amount of space for breath in between each line, is like a purposeful silence which drives this piece in the most perfect way.
Ugly Goodbyes...very well done. Very well done indeed. Thank you for sharing.
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On Saturday, July 13, 2019, NXRKO
(11) wrote:
Wow. Now that touches the soul and is spot on. Hold on tight. The turbulence in this ride just keeps getting rougher. Awesome write my friend!!
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On Saturday, July 13, 2019, Sudos
(147) wrote:
Again and again. From one steady flow into a bittersweet ending. An ugly goodbye as seen through one aspect, may well have been the most beautiful thing ever witnessed to another... Sweetly we break. Good work!
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On Saturday, July 13, 2019, VERITAS OMOIKANE
(23) wrote:
'dwelling crimson screams.' agony in red. blood curdling screams. screaming blood. that one line as well as what it could mean is now stuck inside of my head. thank you for sharing, i appreciate you.
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