At the Same Time

By angelunderneath

She wants to feel like she belongs
Somewhere
She relvels in her solitude
At the same time

She is content in her misery
For the moment
She wishes someone would save her
At the same time

She likes to sit there unaided
Sometimes
She wants someone to sit with her
At the same time

She enjoys confinement in the darkness
Of the night
She wouldn't mind a shed of light
At the same time

She loves to feel a strong arm
Around her
She fights and pushes it away
At the same time

She wants a sense of love
To abound
She despises anyone who gives it
At the same time

She wants eveyone to leave her
Alone
She wants no one to leave her alone
At the same time

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Copyright 2003 angelunderneath
Published on Saturday, October 4, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Lynaes On Thursday, February 3, 2005, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    So perfect, and so true.. many people feel like this. I love the realness and contradiction of this, awesome work.

  • Drea On Friday, February 13, 2004, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    this gets me everytime i read it. so days it hits me harder then others. today is one of those days.. wonderful..~Drea~

  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    anxiously awaiting life, so scared of what has been offered before........your feeling is portrayed so well here.........urban

  • frost bite On Thursday, November 13, 2003, frost bite (43)By person wrote:

    wow, i can relate to this soooo much, wow that was great!

  • Drea On Monday, November 10, 2003, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    .....*speechless*.....wow ~Drea~

  • A Velvet Tongue On Sunday, October 26, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    she wants it all and wants nothing...a classic story of everyone, sometime in their lives...great write hun...*smooches*

  • Loserland On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    love the formula you used...hey, i'm also really into the band TON ...

  • Cinn On Friday, October 24, 2003, Cinn (152)By person wrote:

    This one is is good, no, really good, like it a lot

  • yslehc On Saturday, October 4, 2003, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    beautiful write.. i loved reading it

  • GreekPhilosopher On Saturday, October 4, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    I Liked This One Very Much... Close. Great Write. GPhD.

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Saturday, October 4, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    i totally understand....never really happy either way

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