Ocean Views

By drasticdaydreams

I've seen brighter girls
With bleaker futures
â€‹Watch the waves wear down the rocks
â€‹But even they, on sunny days
Might dance along the docks
â€‹These words I say are words I pray
Do not let the tides dismay
â€‹For steady rhythyms aren't a bore
Magic's found in shells ashore.

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Published on Wednesday, October 12, 2016. Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

If you could keep on ahead, long enough, you'd end up back in the same place.

Comments on "Ocean Views"

On Wednesday, October 12, 2016, 10 Forty Three (543) wrote:

I like the simplicity of this with a great message. Well done. - 10:43
On Wednesday, October 12, 2016, Queazenart (200) wrote:

Lovely poem with a lot of fun rhyming stuff going on. Is this based on a type of poetic structure? I feel like it is, but I'm too ignorant to know it XD Anyways, I enjoyed this piece. It's short, has a flow, and contains a nice message.
On Thursday, October 13, 2016, drasticdaydreams (55) wrote:

Thanks :) And if there is a structure there then ditto- I wouldn't know !