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Ocean Views
By drasticdaydreams
I've seen brighter girls
With bleaker futures
​Watch the waves wear down the rocks
​But even they, on sunny days
Might dance along the docks
​These words I say are words I pray
Do not let the tides dismay
​For steady rhythyms aren't a bore
Magic's found in shells ashore.
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Copyright 2016 drasticdaydreams
Published on Wednesday, October 12, 2016.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
If you could keep on ahead, long enough, you'd end up back in the same place.Comments on "Ocean Views"
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On Wednesday, October 12, 2016, 10 Forty Three
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wrote:
I like the simplicity of this with a great message. Well done. - 10:43
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On Wednesday, October 12, 2016, Queazenart
(212) wrote:
Lovely poem with a lot of fun rhyming stuff going on. Is this based on a type of poetic structure? I feel like it is, but I'm too ignorant to know it XD Anyways, I enjoyed this piece. It's short, has a flow, and contains a nice message.
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On Thursday, October 13, 2016, drasticdaydreams
(63) wrote:
Thanks :) And if there is a structure there then ditto- I wouldn't know !
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