Killing you...

By TheMistressBucket

I bite your neck
I taste your blood
You lied to me
By professing your love
I lay back
I watch you bleed
It streams
It runs
It drips
It beads
You didn't know me
None of you new
What I wanted
And needed from you
I sought your life
On the is cold dark night
I stole it from you
With one hungry bite
You said it was love
That we clumsily made
It makes me laugh
And I watch your life fade
Your blood is hot
It stains my lips
I wipe it
I smear it
With shaking finger tips
I look up
I cry with the Moon
I am lonely now
And I will be hungry soon.

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Copyright 2003 TheMistressBucket
Published on Monday, September 15, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sIo On Monday, October 18, 2004, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    it seems as though the bite is for lust while the blood you take in is love you desire.

  • SilentStalker On Sunday, October 12, 2003, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...I had to read this one again...great job... -Darun Scholar

  • Bloodofdeadpoets On Monday, September 15, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (55)By person wrote:

    Damn, very nice piece the words makes it so easy to picture, thanks for sharing

  • SilentStalker On Monday, September 15, 2003, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    Wow--and I don't say that everyday! Scholar

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