The Grim Reaper

By Chameleon

kill

your

local

suicidal

rhyming

poet...




Your common suicidal vs. the poet


I want to die *bam*

I want to die *bam*

I want to die *bam*

I want to die * I shot you 3 times, why are
you still talking?*



I want to cry *here's a tissue*

*BAM*






Don't tell me you want to die

tell me why

Don't tell me you feel sad

show me your tears




Don't tell me you hate life

make room for someone who
doesn't


I WANT COMMENTS

HERE THEY ARE...


kill

your

local

suicidal

rhyming

poet...




They'll thank you for it later.






*flowers on the stage*


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Copyright 2003 Chameleon
Published on Wednesday, September 3, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Six-Out On Tuesday, May 10, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Chamo, you fucking bitchtit. Where are you?

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, August 17, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    I agree with this guy.

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, January 31, 2006, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    For serious.

  • NikesRain On Tuesday, January 31, 2006, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    *snaps Jon with a towel* silly six

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, January 31, 2006, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    If you only knew. *slaps*

  • NikesRain On Tuesday, January 31, 2006, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    *jumps* oh that's gonna leave a mark :P

  • Chameleon On Tuesday, August 24, 2004, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    What an arrogant b@stard I am, commenting yet again, but for those of you who care...I'm not dead yet, for those of you who don't, I might as well be...the priest will re-appear shorty. Write on, Dp familia...

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, August 24, 2004, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    I will be waiting with my fly open...my the force be with you brotha.

  • Chameleon On Thursday, December 18, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    I'm still alive...if anyone cares...I just have a piece of shit broken computer right now...but I'll be back when I've raised it from the dead.

  • Six-Out On Thursday, December 18, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    HOLY SHIT! *dances with joy*

  • A former member wrote: ABCDEX15'th amendment. wrist= X knife = Y. X+Y= me ejaculating into your wounds so my sperm can nibble away at your heart. fucktards. or i could jab an X into your mothers rear end.

  • Chameleon On Thursday, December 18, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    approved! strange.....but approved.

  • Six-Out On Sunday, November 2, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    I LOVE CHAMELEON'S ASS!

  • Chameleon On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    Then kiss it Six!

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    *kisses it*

  • Chameleon On Friday, October 17, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    Shall I retire this piece? I don't know...it's begining to look like a beaten and molested dead horse here...but then again...I'd hate to destroy the memories...

  • Six-Out On Friday, October 17, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    *sigh* The memories....*cries*

  • Chameleon On Friday, October 17, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    *gives six a tissue,...then takes advantage of him...

  • Chameleon On Monday, October 13, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    EXTREMELY IMPORTANT! Don't bother putting someone (most importantly me) onto your favorites list if you plan on later removing them...what's up with these fashion show critics?

  • Chameleon On Tuesday, October 7, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    A moment of silence for the fallen...........six-out.

  • Chameleon On Monday, September 22, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    The Dark Flower, Matt loves me *pluck* Matt loves me not *pluck* Matt loves me *pluck* Matt loves me not *pluck* (continued)

  • Chameleon On Monday, September 22, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    Damn!....*sifting through the piggy bank and scrounges up $5.32...just enough for an upgrade!...then swiftly realizes he is out of cigarettes*

  • Chameleon On Monday, September 22, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    they like this work *pluck*, they like it not *pluck*, they like this work *pluck*, they like it not *pluck*...........deletes a work...then smokes a cigarette.

  • Chameleon On Monday, September 22, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    *realizes that if he wasn't so damn addicted to cigarettes, he could easily afford an upgrade*

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, September 23, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    *Laughs because he has an upgrade...*

  • A former member wrote: Amen to that...

  • DoctorAsh On Saturday, September 20, 2003, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ...

  • Chameleon On Monday, September 22, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    I don't beleive it! *leaves to go brag to the Doctor Ash fanclub about his fresh new comments*............. not-so-subtlecommentwhoring...

  • Chameleon On Saturday, September 20, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    666th ammendment: Serious shit talking in the chatterbox, is a sure way to make enemies...violators beware...

  • Six-Out On Saturday, September 20, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Quiet you poop nugget.

  • Chameleon On Saturday, September 20, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    *laughing hysterically....then throws a poop nugget at Dave*

  • A former member wrote: shittle me pissers. you poop nuggeted me you skankasaurus PEE WHORE

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Heh, this reminds me a lot of the old dp...people just commenting on shit, and it has no relevence to the poem...you have brought a feeling of nastalgia you stupid whore...now, read the 23rd Amendment!

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    23rd Amendment...Everyone who crosses Six die a slow horrible death while he eats cheetos.

  • Chameleon On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    *considers*...approved,...but only because you're on my favorites...otherwise I would give you a wedgie so massive you would suffocate beneath your own own underwear wrapped around your head.

  • A former member wrote: The poem's good, but the comments it is generating are far more amusing. *grins* Oh! Read my poetry! Please! *winks*

  • Chameleon On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    I agree, thank you for your 'whore'iffic contribution *winks back*

  • nell On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, nell (270)By person wrote:

    if i may 2nd AMMENDMENT NO ONE WORDED COMMENTS ALOWED UNLESS IT IS IN REPLY TO A FUNNY POST!!!! offenders will be bound and mocked in public

  • Chameleon On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    The above ammendment has been approved.

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    yay! ;)

  • A former member wrote: I have a really great piece...it's about this thing...that does that thing...with a couple of more things...yeah. Good times.

  • A former member wrote: I've never been a comment whore before...I feel like I should make a speech or something...nah. READ MY SHTUFF! Wow...this is actually kind of fun...

  • A Velvet Tongue On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    I'll give ya 20 bucks for a poem job!! Oh wait a minute, diff kind of whore, huh?..Damnnn

  • Chameleon On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    ...all types of whores are welcome here, Vel...wait, only 20 bucks *looks through wallet*

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