The Grim Reaper

By Chameleon

kill

your

local

suicidal

rhyming

poet...

Your common suicidal vs. the poet

I want to die *bam*

I want to die *bam*

I want to die *bam*

I want to die * I shot you 3 times, why are
you still talking?*

I want to cry *here's a tissue*

*BAM*

Don't tell me you want to die

tell me why

Don't tell me you feel sad

show me your tears

Don't tell me you hate life

make room for someone who
doesn't

I WANT COMMENTS

HERE THEY ARE...

kill

your

local

suicidal

rhyming

poet...

They'll thank you for it later.

*flowers on the stage*

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Published on Wednesday, September 3, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "The Grim Reaper"

On Tuesday, September 16, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

What...nobody cares anymore...is this it...no more comments? Is there no one else who wants to fuck with this? theartofguilttripcommentwhoreing/donttrythisathomekids/
On Monday, September 15, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

Can I buy a comment? commentwhorecommentwhorecommentwhore
On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, nell (270) wrote:

here's a comment, that will be one million dollars or your soul...and i only take monay orders!
On Sunday, September 14, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

I like french fries
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

Doctor Ash never comments on my work anymore...I guess I'll have to stalk him and kill him now...commentwhoringatitsbest
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

IfyouthinkI'manasshole,andyouhink I'm talking about you...I probably am...because if you write for yourself...you wouldn't give a shit what I have to say...andifyoudon't giveashitwhatIhave to sayI'm probably not talking about youwhyiseverythingonebigcircl
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, manywalks (747) wrote:

Gee, but I thoughtr youy liked me, boo-hoo, boo-hoo, boo-hoo. ~ mw
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, manywalks (747) wrote:

sniff and snort even. ~ mw
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

...IF YOU DON'T...YOU ARE ARROGANT AND HAVE JUST WASTED EVERYBODYS TIME...BUT IF YOU STILL INSIST ON COMMENT WHORING, DO IT HERE AND NOT IN THE CHATTERBOX...there once was a day at Dp when there was so chatterbox to whore...
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, manywalks (747) wrote:

Comment whoring, read my newest piece, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, and while you're at it read all of my others sw well, please, please, please. ~ mw
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

Manywalks...I love you...nothing gets past you, even the worst of sarcastic undertones...of coarse, you know me too well so I suppose you have an unfair advantage.
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, manywalks (747) wrote:

I remember those days, it was a kinder, gentler time, there were far less people that totally pissed me off and made me want to simply rip an eyelid or two off. ~ mw
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

ALLYOUCOMMENTWHORINGNEWBIES- I GIVE YOU FULL PERMISSION TO COMMENT-WHORE-YOUR-HEART-OUT ON THIS PIECE IF YOU THINK YOU HAVE A PIECE WORTH READING...IF YOU DO YOU GET THE HIGHEST RESPECTS...
On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, nell (270) wrote:

high respects!!!!!! WOOOT COUNT ME IN! Sorry I AM NEW HERE I LIKE YOUR WORK, reminds me of mine,you should check it out
On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

HA! Damn newbies!...I guess because your name is Nell, and your on my favorites...I'll let you slide(=
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

WHO WILL BE THE NEXT 'NEW' DP POET TO BLOW OUR MINDS AND BREAK THE TREND OF SLOPPY MELODRAMATIC CHEESE-SAUCE WHINING?.....THIS IS A CHALLENGE... KEEP READING KIDDIES...
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

That would be me, I'm not really Six-Out...just an imposter! Ya, that's it.
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY FRIEND?!? BASTARDS!
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

He is dead...forget about him...I am the new Six.
On Friday, September 12, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

It's my party, and I'll cry if I want to...
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, manywalks (747) wrote:

cry if I want to, cry if I want to, you'd cry too if it happened to you....
On Friday, September 12, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

Newbie ammendment 2: New DP poets are great, so long as they can say something in their POETRY...not just make ignorant remarks in the chatter box...but hey, don't take my word for it...find out the hard way and meet the enforcer...SIX! WHERE ARE YOU?
On Friday, September 12, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

*waves*
On Friday, September 12, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

Newbie ammendment 1: Don't piss on the coffee table...it's rude, and in some parts of the world can get you killed.
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, manywalks (747) wrote:

Or at the very least hurt terribly bad. ~ mw
On Thursday, September 11, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

*drags an ignorant newbies carcass across the comment section* YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE...thisisnotnewbiebashingthisisnotnewbiebashingthisisnitnewbiebashingthisisnotaboutyouthisisnotaboutyouthisisnotnewbiebashing
On Wednesday, September 10, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

*slaps a high five with velvet, then goes after Piles_of_dead_people with a chainsaw...*
On Friday, September 5, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434) wrote:

bravo bravo...here here...I couldnt of said it any better or blunter...*slaps high ^ 5 with ya*
On Friday, September 5, 2003, nell (270) wrote:

ahhhh u always hit dead on comment whore....lol
On Thursday, September 4, 2003, SeventhCircle (22) wrote:

whoa... different. i like it.
On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Crystal Passion (221) wrote:

I laughed. I cried. I laughed some more. Phew I need a tissue....
On Saturday, September 13, 2003, manywalks (747) wrote:

I laughed so hard I farted.
On Thursday, September 4, 2003, OLd SouL (717) wrote:

here you go commentwhore, another freakin' comment. I had a blast reading this.
On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

I'macommentwhore,I'macommentwhore,I'macommentwhore,I'macommentwhore,I'macommentwhore........I'macommentwhore...
On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

*GRIM REAPER* SHUT THE F@CK UP CHAMELEON...YOUR RUINING IT *BAM*...
On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

up in the poetry section of your local bookstore or library. (Although I do love Dr. Suess)
On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

although...its seems to be the beleif of many individuals lately, that if you slap any two words on paper that rhyme, you have successfully created poetry...perhaps...but remember when thinking this...nursery rhymes and dr.suess also rhyme and don't end u
On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Chameleon (111) wrote:

1st Ammendment: I have nothing against rhyming if you have something interesting to say.
On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Ophelia (221) wrote:

I hate to say but I rhyme all the time, so hay listen I got plenty to say, , ,nice work, O,
A former member wrote: I rhyme. I love to rhyme, it's fun. bleh!
On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, Liz (265) wrote:

*smirks that action stars are now acceptable literary devices* You are an asshole, and I like it. I'll have to watch my stuff closely.
On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

::laughs:: i adore this! yes! exactly! read my poem under *anathema*... "we all get one life"... along the same lines... and i like what you say- don't just say it... SHOW US why you feel that way. 's what poetry's all about. :)
A former member wrote: Wow nice, I really liked the set up of this too, made it look almost like you were painting the words on the paper instead of just writing them. ~Urban Shipwreck~
A former member wrote: *agrees with Urban*
A former member wrote: good point. overdone.. go look at my profile pic
On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

dave... i LOVE it! such an artist!