Succumb to Lust

By poe_lover28

Frosty fingertips
Slip
Down your form
Chilling
Thrilling
Delighting

Even that... icy embrace
Kindles a desire
Deep
Inside your entire
   Body
This lover is a tease
... arousing you with ease
A tongue of satin
Takes a trip
Along your stomach
Upward
Don't let inhibitions
Slip
Her clothes still remain
You must refrain
From tearing
Ripping
Them away
Just as you cannot
   Contain
   ... Your lust
Your chest meets her bust
Burning lips
Cooled.. chilled
Can you trust
Her?
This Aphodite beauty
After all
She has killed
Before
With colorless eyes
The succubus
   Intensifies
   ... your desire
Beat...Beat...Beat
..Beat..
Goes your heart
All of this is your fault
As her tail
Ties your legs
Her claws
Slash your throat
You attempt to thrash
   To get away
   To fight your lover
As life fades
So many shades.. of crimson
   She feasts
Such a lovely beast
She saunters off
Hips still sway
To lay..
..Claim
To the next..
Did you enjoy..
   A moment
...of pleasure...
Your trust
Made it rain..
..Your blood
You d i e d
All for lust

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Published on Monday, March 17, 2014. Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Succumb to Lust"

On Thursday, August 31, 2017, worm (1194) wrote:

nice! post more...
On Wednesday, June 14, 2017, evangeline (6) wrote:

this poem made my heart race a bit... great work
A former member wrote: , I liked the whole danger/pleasure mix, excellent write
A former member wrote: Dark, enthralling, lustful...this is fantastic. Danger for a chance of pleasure...excellent piece.
A former member wrote: What can I say? A most delicious read, danger and excitement, couldn't ask for more. Excellent write.
On Tuesday, March 18, 2014, poe_lover28 (164) wrote:

Thank you, means alot coming from such a marvellous poet. I couldn't ask for more either ;) â™¥
On Monday, March 17, 2014, Peyton1 (204) wrote:

Oooh, such intense heat delivered from her frosty fingertips! Fires ablaze from her burning lips and swaying hips. Her satin tongue..... excellent write miss poe_lover28. A thrilling and very enjoyable read...................... ~ACE~
On Monday, March 17, 2014, poe_lover28 (164) wrote:

Always wonderful commentary! Much thanks, so glad you loved it! The coldest of touches can still set fire if done so the right way
On Monday, March 17, 2014, blue angel (877) wrote:

Oh, the fierce, sexy succubus.. Much loved this wavering write.. Nice inking* :)
On Monday, March 17, 2014, poe_lover28 (164) wrote:

Thank you glad you enjoyed
On Monday, March 17, 2014, Commander_Cadaver (245) wrote:

Sounds like my ex girlfriend...I mean nice write. Dark, detailed and very well worded.
On Monday, March 17, 2014, poe_lover28 (164) wrote:

Lol oh my you poor thing! XD thank you very much means alot !

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