53

By mysticventures

just too much to see

i've yet to be free

there's much more to be

five score and three

mean nothing to me

the breath of Eternity

is all that i see
 

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Copyright 2014 mysticventures
Published on Friday, January 24, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • FadedBlues On Sunday, January 26, 2014, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...nice write. the years are young in the concept of eternity...

  • A former member wrote: I don't quite know the context behind this but I like the way your words mesh. Good job :)

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