Into the Expanses

By raspberry89

Parables learned the hard way can be haunting 
In a life lived solitary lonely and wanting 
But this is what I get for trying to trap a star 
An emotional scar, smothering radiance mars 
The balance of things was too upset 
And the other stargazers couldn't forget 
The pressure quickly became unstable 
It’s like I was searching for truth in a fable 
You may think you know who a person is 
But blinding is the star that is burdened like this 
It's bound to become an illusion of what you wish it could be 
When you do good you should throw it in the sea 
Don't drink poison to quench a thirst 
In morals the sad man must become well versed 

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Copyright 2014 raspberry89
Published on Thursday, January 2, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Saturday, June 27, 2015, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Great flow and loved the way you wove the message throughout the fabric of this write. Very nicely done.

  • A former member wrote: That's what I get for trying to trap a star. I love that line. So true!

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, January 2, 2014, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...nice write. it's a dangerous aspiration, to harness a flaming star...

  • A former member wrote: Great flow, and great imagery. one can never fully see the soul and true aura of one person completely, not even when all this person seems to have has been bared...the human mind could be more complex than the universe really...like a kaleidoscope in motion

  • A former member wrote: Knowledge of all can be an unbridled burden, temperance goes a long way. One can never truly understand the mindset and behaviors of other people without knowing exactly what they have experience and what drives them. A truly remarkable write, really loved this piece.

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