Judas
By The Fallen Angel
Cold, quiescent clouds of crimson rain
Thick drops of pain
Falling on your lips, drying in the crevices
From a crown of twigs entwined
They guffaw at your shame,
and the effervescence of a dieing name
And I take pleasure in them that do them
It feels as if I defied Life
Taking control of your destiny,
Having your soul hang on a thin line
Holy puppet on a string
And I cannot help but wonder, what was on your mind
Was it Why?
Was it I Knew?
What was it that made you cry
The incentive of your annihilation need not explain, I was
altered by an orgasmic wickedness. It feels good everywhere
Darkness. Heaviness. Demonic aura taking over my skin
The Devil Himself was manifesting through my stare
Uncanny sweats trinkled when I pressed against your cheeks
From this rushing writhing high
The adrenaline flowing to and through my heart
And from my lips a poisonous kiss
It felt right
It felt great
Powerful
Indeed, I made you bleed
Becoming something more than just a man
But a Satan
Mothers and fathers dare to name their children Judas
Not forgetting the reluctance of mentioning it
Even I can become a God
For years you have convinced them of the Messiah
Within a day I became like a God, a namesake forever revered
My presence is an ill blessing
Pieces of silver were just an additional benefit
The accolade was to show the world That in the darkness
The Truth
For it is in the darkest cavern I gaze and see for what is the light
It told me like hot candle wax on my eyes
You are a Sadist
Taking away the sweet vanilla extracts of life. They I desire
My simplest God given pleasures you deny
...it is done,
the world has already grown thin of you
Now die with the shock
Let your last gasp seep
Quietly...
Comments on "Judas"
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On Saturday, December 27, 2003, Mr King
(547) wrote:
an adventure... you take me on an adventure into spaces I've not ever gone before... thank you.
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On Thursday, October 9, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
mm. brilliant. i wrote a remake of the Adam and Eve story... taking into account Lilith. it was delightful to see this telling of the Judas story.
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On Sunday, October 5, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
"Even I can become a God For years you have convinced them of the Messiah Within a day I became like a God, a namesake forever revered My presence is an ill blessing" i cant think of anything to say.
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On Sunday, October 5, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
my mind is saying "read it again" and i think i will. altho it was say here a lot. i to do not know what to say. i also am at a loss for words. ~Drea~
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A former member wrote:
I am speechless...or would it wordless? Anywho...what could I possibly say? This is...well there are no words for it.
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A former member wrote:
wow this is amazing. i love it.
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, nell
(270) wrote:
wicked write=) its so intense and evil i love it.
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On Tuesday, August 19, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Shit...that is what I call beautiful poetry. I'm seriously at a loss for words...amazing.
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On Tuesday, August 19, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
awesome poem, and slightly disturbing, good all the same *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Sunday, August 24, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
the more i read this the more i like it, i like it alot right now hehe :P *~*aNDReW*~*