Judas

By The Fallen Angel

Cold, quiescent clouds of crimson rain
Thick drops of pain
Falling on your lips, drying in the crevices
From a crown of twigs entwined

They guffaw at your shame,
and the effervescence of a dieing name
And I take pleasure in them that do them

It feels as if I defied Life
Taking control of your destiny,
Having your soul hang on a thin line
Holy puppet on a string

And I cannot help but wonder, what was on your mind
Was it Why?
Was it I Knew?
What was it that made you cry

The incentive of your annihilation need not explain, I was
altered by an orgasmic wickedness. It feels good everywhere
Darkness. Heaviness. Demonic aura taking over my skin
The Devil Himself was manifesting through my stare

Uncanny sweats trinkled when I pressed against your cheeks
From this rushing writhing high
The adrenaline flowing to and through my heart
And from my lips a poisonous kiss

It felt right
It felt great
Powerful
Indeed, I made you bleed

Becoming something more than just a man
But a Satan
Mothers and fathers dare to name their children Judas
Not forgetting the reluctance of mentioning it

Even I can become a God
For years you have convinced them of the Messiah
Within a day I became like a God, a namesake forever revered
My presence is an ill blessing

Pieces of silver were just an additional benefit
The accolade was to show the world That in the darkness
The Truth
For it is in the darkest cavern I gaze and see for what is the light

It told me like hot candle wax on my eyes
You are a Sadist
Taking away the sweet vanilla extracts of life. They I desire
My simplest God given pleasures you deny

...it is done,
the world has already grown thin of you
Now die with the shock
Let your last gasp seep
Quietly...








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Copyright 2003 Fallen Angel
Published on Tuesday, August 19, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mr King On Saturday, December 27, 2003, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    an adventure... you take me on an adventure into spaces I've not ever gone before... thank you.

  • KittyStryker On Thursday, October 9, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    mm. brilliant. i wrote a remake of the Adam and Eve story... taking into account Lilith. it was delightful to see this telling of the Judas story.

  • Drea On Sunday, October 5, 2003, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    "Even I can become a God For years you have convinced them of the Messiah Within a day I became like a God, a namesake forever revered My presence is an ill blessing" i cant think of anything to say.

  • Drea On Sunday, October 5, 2003, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    my mind is saying "read it again" and i think i will. altho it was say here a lot. i to do not know what to say. i also am at a loss for words. ~Drea~

  • A former member wrote: I am speechless...or would it wordless? Anywho...what could I possibly say? This is...well there are no words for it.

  • A former member wrote: wow this is amazing. i love it.

  • nell On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, nell (270)By person wrote:

    wicked write=) its so intense and evil i love it.

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, August 19, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Shit...that is what I call beautiful poetry. I'm seriously at a loss for words...amazing.

  • _Andrew_ On Tuesday, August 19, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    awesome poem, and slightly disturbing, good all the same *~*aNDReW*~*

  • _Andrew_ On Sunday, August 24, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    the more i read this the more i like it, i like it alot right now hehe :P *~*aNDReW*~*

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