Soundless Thunder
By darkheartmagic
Can you now feel my thoughts,
and see me from the seams?
Do you understand,
that I dream within a dream?
With damaged nights,
and abstract air,
What words were spoken,
With tears that care.
The truth we've known becomes a lie,
for what is real can we decide?
Lost within this dream-like state,
of love and lust consumed by hate.
These thoughts I feel,
Nevermore my own.
In this dream I stand alone.
Am I awake, or deep in slumber?
In this world with soundless thunder.
The black it comes to recreate,
A mind so shattered in the wake.
For what I thought and so it seems,
that I am stuck between two dreams.
Through this dream with fog and mist,
my soul it bleeds yet don't exist.
I dream one day my dreams will stop,
as I'm alone so lost in thought.
I pray and plead for love unshown,
A dreamers dream a fathomed home.
I sit in quite and often wander
of bleeding skies with soundless thunder.
Comments on "Soundless Thunder"
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On Thursday, August 8, 2013, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Smoothly stated in several ways, with an over-arching future fear of something lingering just beyond perception perhaps. We all have those demons, cheers DHM!
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On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
I read this out loud actually, and the rhythm and flow again, were unmatched! seriously good poetry you have here xoxo
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On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(275) wrote:
Yet again an astounding piece. It is wonderful... stuck between dreams... What an interesting thought... Loved it :)
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On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
"The truth we've known becomes a lie, for what is real can we decide? Lost within this dream-like state, of love and lust consumed by hate." Feeling that the most. Very well written & much enjoyed :)
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On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
Do I even need to say I loved it? Because I'm pretty sure I've said that to all your pieces and if I haven't I've probably thought it. Another great work by you. Absolutely stunning.
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A former member wrote:
8th stanza, third line, seventh word; I believe you meant "will". That being said, I enjoyed the rhythem of this piece. Effervescent states are enjoyable at times; Kudos.
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On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Just like you enjoyed the rhythm...
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On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, darkheartmagic
(82) wrote:
Thanks man.