Soundless Thunder

By darkheartmagic

Can you now feel my thoughts,
and see me from the seams?
Do you understand,
that I dream within a dream?

With damaged nights,
and abstract air,
What words were spoken,
With tears that care.

The truth we've known becomes a lie,
for what is real can we decide?

Lost within this dream-like state,
of love and lust consumed by hate.

These thoughts I feel,
Nevermore my own.
In this dream I stand alone.

Am I awake, or deep in slumber?
In this world with soundless thunder.

The black it comes to recreate,
A mind so shattered in the wake.
For what I thought and so it seems,
that I am stuck between two dreams.

Through this dream with fog and mist,
my soul it bleeds yet don't exist.
I dream one day my dreams will stop,
as I'm alone so lost in thought.

I pray and plead for love unshown,
A dreamers dream a fathomed home.

I sit in quite and often wander
of bleeding skies with soundless thunder.


 

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Copyright 2013 darkheartmagic
Published on Wednesday, August 7, 2013.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Thursday, August 8, 2013, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    Smoothly stated in several ways, with an over-arching future fear of something lingering just beyond perception perhaps. We all have those demons, cheers DHM!

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (334)By person wrote:

    I read this out loud actually, and the rhythm and flow again, were unmatched! seriously good poetry you have here xoxo

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (275)By person wrote:

    Yet again an astounding piece. It is wonderful... stuck between dreams... What an interesting thought... Loved it :)

  • Deathkitten On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    "The truth we've known becomes a lie, for what is real can we decide? Lost within this dream-like state, of love and lust consumed by hate." Feeling that the most. Very well written & much enjoyed :)

  • andhaka On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    Do I even need to say I loved it? Because I'm pretty sure I've said that to all your pieces and if I haven't I've probably thought it. Another great work by you. Absolutely stunning.

  • A former member wrote: 8th stanza, third line, seventh word; I believe you meant "will". That being said, I enjoyed the rhythem of this piece. Effervescent states are enjoyable at times; Kudos.

  • Deathkitten On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    Just like you enjoyed the rhythm...

  • darkheartmagic On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, darkheartmagic (82)By person wrote:

    Thanks man.

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