Autumn Rain.

By DarkAyla

Burning leaves.
Fall to the ground.
Black Umbrella's.
Held up high.
Shiny black asphalt.
Covered with Autumn.
Pretty puddles.
Reflect the bleeding sky.
Wind blowing,
Trees of fire
Ashes fall at your feet.
It rains in October
So perfectly.

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Published on Monday, August 18, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

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April 13th, 2010

Comments on "Autumn Rain."

On Tuesday, April 13, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343) wrote:

In the brevity it was breathtaking..Imagery flashed before my eyes..Fire..Thanks
On Tuesday, April 13, 2010, HeadpatSlut (257) wrote:

Very nice, I like the imagery you used in the first and last lines, it's the kind of thing that keeps me reading. Thanks for the nice write.
A former member wrote: Wonderful poem. Loved it how you put the season view into it with the burning leaves. Loved it!
On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

*Looking confused* This is realy a wonderful poem. Tiger
On Monday, August 18, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

Call it Mister Autum...not really, but I did like it.
On Monday, August 18, 2003, OLd SouL (717) wrote:

Skipping to the Morgue? BTW, I really like this... I like the feeling I get when I envision what you wrote.
On Monday, August 18, 2003, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

mm... i like... title?... i'd say "taste of summers, dying"... just a thought. ^_^
On Monday, August 18, 2003, DarkAyla (51) wrote:

Title suggestions...?
On Monday, August 18, 2003, DarkAyla (51) wrote:

Its a little unfinished..