Beauty in Tears

By andhaka

Wet velvet cheek resting upon the bitter ground
Brackish tears trickling down your face
In unbridled angst you have drowned
Fallen head first, from your grace
Like shattered shards of tempered glass
Once unyielding, now lay broken in pieces
Your feathery scarlet heart has turned to brass
As the tear flow increases
Bloodshot eyes meet my own
And I can’t help but smile
Although you look contempt and alone
You’re beauty shines more profound, than in awhile
Stripped bare from the façade of joy, and sanity here you lie
Hushed torment replaced by throbbing raw anguish
With your heart ripped open, you freely cry
Little by little I see you languish
And as you fade, you grow lighter then the air
I watch your soul ride the breeze
With every howl you lose just a bit of your despair
A smudge of serenity replaces unease 

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Copyright 2013 andhaka
Published on Tuesday, June 18, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I can't be the only one who thinks that people look the most beautiful when they cry
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  • nkronsch On Thursday, June 20, 2013, nkronsch (16)By person wrote:

    Fantastic and entirely relatable... I wrote a song on a similar subject before. Very nice work... I'd say keep it up but I know you will.

  • andhaka On Friday, June 21, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    awe thanks so much : )

  • dwells On Wednesday, June 19, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    You must have cried so much to know this truth that only sorrow and triumph can bring to the soul. Beautiful Andy, thanks!

  • andhaka On Wednesday, June 19, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    I've had my fair share of tears lol. Thanks dwells im glad u liked it. : )

  • PoetessDarkly On Wednesday, June 19, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    awesome "A", your words hit home. wonderfully penned

  • andhaka On Wednesday, June 19, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    Awe thanks im glad u liked it : )

  • A former member wrote: Beauty indeed, quite the profound write, very nice.

  • andhaka On Wednesday, June 19, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    Thank you : )

  • A former member wrote: This was an absolutely lovely pome i enjoyed reading it(:

  • andhaka On Wednesday, June 19, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    Thanks i'm glad you enjoyed.

  • A former member wrote: this is one of the most beutiful poems i've ever heard.

  • andhaka On Tuesday, June 18, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    awe thank you i'm glad you like it. : )

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