piano girl {w.BlackVelvetRose}
By FadedBlues
in the corner, under an old painting of ‘The Last Supper’
she sits, perched upon a rickety piano bench.
a baby grand in front of her, desperately out of tune,
fingers caressing the keys, enticing the notes of ‘Amazing Grace.’
she played it alone, reminiscing the times her soul was filled
with love. it felt warm, it felt safe, even though not in tune.
she knew it was lacking in accordance
yet she played…and she cried.
she, like her piano, was in need of gentle care.
love, in its blindness, led her too often to companions
who were deaf to the melody of her heart.
her fingers only found warmth on the ebony, and the ivory.
her bones were brittle, her heart beyond repair,
but she would play her music,
and the moon would still rise
to bring light to the encroaching darkness.
Comments on "piano girl {w.BlackVelvetRose}"
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A former member wrote:
I always wanted a girl like this, I can envision her in a barren room with moon rays cascading over her and the piano from just behind the curtains. Awesome collab from two of my personal favorites here on dp, nice job guys.
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On Saturday, June 22, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Once again you two are very intune and never disappoint with your collabs. And your individual works too. Very nice. Later and til next time -
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On Saturday, June 22, 2013, M Morgan
(198) wrote:
Memories come back reading this poem. Not so good to remember but always a pleasure read you. Love that
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On Wednesday, June 19, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Thanks, Friends. the piano is now in tune...
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On Wednesday, June 19, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
sometimes... i feel like the woman in this poem. i suppose that is where the inspiration came from to start it. It turned out to be a lovely piece of work and the picture is beautiful...
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A former member wrote:
This is a beautiful poem. Truly.
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On Tuesday, June 18, 2013, nkronsch
(16) wrote:
I like that a lot... I'm a musician myself so it strikes a chord within me.
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On Monday, June 17, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(332) wrote:
Very well done you two :) This was beautiful xoxo
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On Monday, June 17, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
i love the metaphor, the flow, and the imagery. Beautifully crafted : )
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On Monday, June 17, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
This piece reminds me of an friend that recently passed on, she played some old hymns , but it was I with tears ~^_^~ Thanks for the memory revival* Well done you two ;)
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A former member wrote:
Stunning, serene, sad, this piece really was breathtaking, what an amazing collaboration, I salute you both.