My Disease

By SalemLex

Its killing me inside
Tearing me apart
I can feel it destroying me
My insides cant handle it
This thing inside of my heart
Takes over peoples lives
And it can be attributted to my life style
Yet how can I change how I live
Because of who I am
My body feels like its dying
And there's nothing I can do
So I keep my life as is
And slowly die from the inside out
All this because of lonelyness

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Copyright 2003 SalemLex
Published on Wednesday, August 13, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: At least the Cause is only loneliness. Depression is a horrible thing.

  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    "Each person was to himself one alone. One oneness, a unit in a society, but always afraid, always alone. If I should scream, if i should call for help, would anyone hear... would it even matter? " -Ray Bradbury Very well put. Loneliness has a way of pla

  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    ying with your mind, making you do things you wouldnt normally do. A_C

  • A former member wrote: being lonely sucks. but your not alone, there are a lot of people out there who feel the same way. i love this write. i can see how being lonely IS a disease.

  • A former member wrote: Loneliness is like the rain,from the sky it drops, but in the end loneliness flows with the streams...

  • A former member wrote: Lonliness is unbearable at times. Even when you are in a crowd of people...

  • _Andrew_ On Thursday, August 21, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    yaw, lonliness is like death, only through life we have the chance to try and make a difference, hang in there *~*aNDReW*~*

  • Saint_Reaper On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, Saint_Reaper (200)By person wrote:

    ouch, sounds painful

  • Stranger On Monday, August 18, 2003, Stranger (263)By person wrote:

    The irony of loneliness is that it is everyone's disease. You describe the pain well. So sad, but true.

  • urbanhumility On Monday, August 18, 2003, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    may your "vacancy" be filled...............urban

  • SalemLex On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, SalemLex (25)By person wrote:

    Actually it has slowly, thanks urban.

  • Rebel_Angel On Friday, August 15, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    wow. I like the ending! Sometimes I feel this way too.

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