My lost love

By brokenheartedmarine

I lost you when she walked in,
and she took your heart.
You told me that maybe we wouldn't work out,
My heart broke for i knew that i had lost you.

You where my life,
I told you of my dreams.
Of the life that i wanted,
And that you were the one that i wanted.

I told you of my fears,
and you told me that you would never leave me.
How foolish of me to believe you,
Can't you see how you tore my heart apart.

Everyone warned me to not give you all of me,
but you took my heart and i feel for you.
You never look at me when i pass you in the street,
I nener thought love would hurt this bad.

But girl you tore me apart,
I wish i could be her.
To know the secrets you tell her,
To feel the love you give her.

If for just one night,
I would love to hold you.
To remember what your body felt like,
for your eyes to gaze knowingly like you used to.

All i want to say is that i still love you,
and i always will.
You where my everything,
And for that i will never forget you.

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© 2007 brokenheartedmarine
Published on Saturday, June 9, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This hurts my heart to read, and I'm sorry that you had to go through this. But take comfort in knowing that you will one day meet a girl who loves you more than you could ever love her. I'm here if you need to chat.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Sunday, June 17, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Sounds painfull but teen like. Wellcome to DP. a mindfull place for those ermm mindfull yeah

  • Imsosickxxx On Sunday, June 10, 2007, Imsosickxxx (80)By person wrote:

    Hmmm, the ultimate saga of those in uniform and the ones they love. Seems we can't do much but stand in conviction with our hearts on our sleeves...

  • Moonflower On Sunday, June 10, 2007, Moonflower (298)By person wrote:

    very beautiful.

  • SalemLex On Saturday, June 9, 2007, SalemLex (25)By person wrote:

    All i can say is i feel your pain too. Like this, definately bookmarking it.

  • Army Barbie On Saturday, June 9, 2007, Army Barbie (316)By person wrote:

    If my Marine...ex...would say this there would be no second thoughts. I'd defiantly run back to him in a moment's time, as bad as he hurt me. Sad to say, I suppose. People here would be mad.

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