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the growsome effect.
By tallygrowsome
how awful
change
can touch facets
spinning
like a universe
around
your soul-
-...sun
maybe i'm
not
supposed
to recognise you
but
i'm
still
sorry.
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Copyright 2013 tallygrowsome
Published on Friday, April 26, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
bit nervous about posting something for the first time (i apologise if my grammar stinks about).Comments on "the growsome effect."
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A former member wrote:
Again, such a unique feel you have, a very transient, echoing dream~like quality that makes one reach for meaning without really needing any. Interesting. I'll want to read more from you.
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On Sunday, April 28, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(700)
wrote:
welcome to the darkness! I think you did a marvelous first post!
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On Saturday, April 27, 2013, carlosjackal
(3018) wrote:
A riddlesome thought-provoker of the best variety..Welcome to DP!
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On Saturday, April 27, 2013, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
Funny that you chose the word, "facets"; that pretty much sums this piece up as a whole. Little nuances here and there, something sleeping and profound, a lot of things register with this piece. Minimalism tends to do that to a person. A fine first entry, enjoy your stay.
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On Friday, April 26, 2013, dwells
(4284) wrote:
I always told my tallywhacker to grow some, but he never listens (HA!). Welcome to DP and this was wonderful on several levels. Obviously I picked the lowest one. Cheers!
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On Saturday, April 27, 2013, tallygrowsome
(9) wrote:
lowest can be funniest :)
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On Friday, April 26, 2013, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
I felt the depths underneath the simplicity of this piece. Welcome to dp... leave your shy feelings at the door. And please, feel free to share some more. Hope you enjoy the site :} It definitely becomes home for some
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On Saturday, April 27, 2013, tallygrowsome
(9) wrote:
thank you for the welcome :)
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