For Her

By andhaka

  

Please look to me

I can see you suffering underneath

Your strength crumbling down

Fear riding your soul beneath

 

Don’t turn around

I can see the tears filling your eyes

I know you’re falling now

But I will help you rise

 

You tell me you’re scared of the dark

You say you don’t know why

The shadows never cut you before

It began when he died

 

Please don’t stop now

You’ve finally opened up to me

I know it was hard for you

But life has no guarantee

 

The darkness only masks what’s been there before

Even at night the sun illuminates from behind the moon

The moon may cover our beacon of radiance nightly

But that doesn’t mean the sun shines any less brightly 

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Copyright 2013 andhaka
Published on Wednesday, April 24, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

for my best friend, whose going through a rough time. whose suffering.
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  • Deathkitten On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Sad but sweet piece. Even with darkness tugging away, you presented an optimistic setting within. Great write!

  • andhaka On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    I think in every horrible situation we can always find a silver lining...sometimes that lining is easier to then others. Thanks for reading :)

  • A former member wrote: Yet again, your endings are wonderful. It leaves me feeling quite whole if that's not an odd thing to say. Great message.

  • andhaka On Wednesday, May 29, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    Nope not odd at all. :) Thanks for commenting.

  • Kristoff On Saturday, May 25, 2013, Kristoff (37)By person wrote:

    Amazing, even if it is sad! It makes me cry and smile at the beauty of the whole poem... Yet another of your great poems!

  • andhaka On Saturday, May 25, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    Thanks your making me blush with all your compliments. : )

  • A former member wrote: This is a beautiful piece, so much compassion, I can tell you really put your whole heart into this which is what makes such a sad piece so beautiful. Thank you for sharing!

  • andhaka On Saturday, April 27, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    Thanks you and it my pleasure to share this with you all lol

  • A former member wrote: How melancholy... I can sense you put your heart and soul into this piece. My sincere condolences for your friend. I do hope your friend pulls through this time of sensitivity.

  • andhaka On Thursday, April 25, 2013, andhaka (168)By person wrote:

    thanks so much. and i hope she pulls through as well, it's not easy losing someone to suicide but she's handling it better then i could.

  • A former member wrote: Sad and Sweet

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, April 25, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...nice. it's a poem of compassion...

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