daffodils look lovely today

By boneplate



 

This is the long dark march of my soul.

sickheartedly alone, definite.

aimlessly trudging,
finding a home in
leafless existence.

Starving, 

to be…. 



The only sound is the guttural shriek
of abandonment.


 Has anyone ever looked lovely?

 


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Copyright 2013 boneplate
Published on Tuesday, April 2, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, December 31, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Fantastic piece! I like your style. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I've been finding it difficult to comment on poems lately and I'm assuming it's because the ones I want to speak about the most are the ones that literally take the words right out of my mind...everything about this is perfect. Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, April 2, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...the soul here moves only because time moves. there's no hope of reaching a destination w/less misery, or any lovliness...

  • A former member wrote: daffodil lament by the cranberries brought me here.... this is stark and strange and beautiful in its loneliness.

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