The Little Things, Honey.
By jodeanna
He told me,
"It's the little things
that mean the most,
honey.
It took me a while to
realize that but I did."
Oh, and I agree!
It's the way that his eyes
light up
like Christmas bulbs
when he talks about how glorious
it is
to lose himself in the pit.
It's the way that his jeans fall
just a little too low on his hips
and his ass shows like a child
trying to peek while counting.
It's the way that he smiles
and throws his head back like
a lion roaring in the rain
when
he laughs without abandon.
It's the way that his brown eyes
betray his shame when he talks
about the things he's done and
the things he's lost in the past.
It's the way that his smile
curves up just a little higher
on one side than the other
like
a poorly painted clown.
It's the sound he makes after
he inhales sharply when I bite
too roughly on his sensitive
and deeply freckled shoulders.
It's the way the sunlight
wakes me first as we lay
entangled like a bird's nest
but
I don't want to wake him.
It's the way that our fingers
and eyes remain locked together
long after we both say goodbye
for the second time that morning.
He told me,
"It's the little things
that mean the most, honey.
It took
me a while to
realize that but I did."
Author's Note:
This feels extremely personal to me for some reason..Comments on "The Little Things, Honey."
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On Friday, September 16, 2016, out there
(166) wrote:
Lovely and very well written. A pleasure to read.
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On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, eidos
(40) wrote:
it's like completing the edges of a puzzle, when you find that one that makes you feel this way. The rest, it just falls together from there.
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On Monday, October 8, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
This is so beautiful...with each line I read I saw why you loved him. This is personal but I thank you for sharing it. Perfect 10.
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On Monday, October 8, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...this is an excellent portrait of the secret personal things that allow joy to sneak up on us...