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will I
By The_Scavenger
As I lay here on the floor
I can't help but wonder whats this life for?
Why am I here; what good can i do
As I lay here on this floor
I can't help but wonder if i go
would I be missed if i left
would they be proud if i did
what good could i do
dressed in army shoes
with gun in hand and blade in other
Dressed in army greens.
could i really keep the peace
to my ears comes the answer
I'll stand before my father and mother
I'll defend these people, this state, this country...
I will go, I can do good with that rifle
Only fears when i go
will I be missed...
will they be proud...
will I be remembered...
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Copyright 2003 The_Scavenger
Published on Wednesday, July 30, 2003.
Filed under:
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Comments on "will I"
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A former member wrote:
how sad :O
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On Friday, August 8, 2003, Diva_Satanica
(78)
wrote:
Heroic and captivating.The U.N.would love it.-D.S
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A former member wrote:
Sad and somehow heroic at the same time. A nice read I like it very much. a_o_h
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
I liked this alot. It was good to hear your doubts. Never hide them in fear, they can only grow bigger then. Pull them out in the open and conclude, like you have. This contains alot in a few words. Very good.
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On Friday, August 1, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
U will be missed and people will be proud as Aurora said! I don't know how u could think that atleast she wouldn't miss u!
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On Wednesday, July 30, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
how could u think foe even a second that i wouldn't miss u or be proud of u. i love u and i'll miss u and be so proud of u and i'll remember every moment that we were happy together while u are gone. i love u much so. and i like this write too ur parents
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On Wednesday, July 30, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
ur parents will be proud even if they doont show it right now
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