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Reach (My Internal)
By Midnight Phoenix
The casualty was left for dead
Her home a hundred miles away
Still these thoughts and words unsaid
All her memories decay
Watching lonely from all this mess
Blood and tears fare thee well
Await the torture I can’t miss
My internal will never exist
An anonymous girl died today
She was mine but we’ll never know it
Still searching to find a better way
Self destroyed for feeling the same
Caught in a dream without a meaning
She cried out for someone to show
How could I know there was more to being
But I guess I will never know...
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Copyright 2003 little nemo
Published on Tuesday, July 29, 2003.
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Comments on "Reach (My Internal)"
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A former member wrote:
"Caught in a dream without a meaning
She cried out for someone to show
How could I know there was more to being
But I guess I will never know... "
i like that :D
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On Thursday, July 31, 2003, diavolessa
(207)
wrote:
I really like the way you build your poems, the structure is really impressive. I like it very much! {dia}
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On Wednesday, July 30, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
There is a tender saddness about this, the never knowing and the sorrow combined beautifully..........O.
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On Tuesday, July 29, 2003, pessum ire animus
(57) wrote:
ive never been much on comments... dont know what to put... except... that i know where this comes from...
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