Ripped Open and Naked

By spring hews

I laid my heart out on that dirty table, waiting for you to pierce it with your forked tongue.
When you did, I was not surprised to find myself weeping tears that not even time could heal. Pain that would leave a scar so deep that it tattooed the soul.
Shadows will forever hide the lovers breath that reeked with romance and possibilities.
You became a murderer of a once beautiful thing, but you are not the only guilty party, for I was the one who bared the naked flesh of my throat to be slit.

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Copyright 2012 spring hews
Published on Sunday, September 2, 2012.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Sunday, September 2, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Some overworked metaphors early-on but a fine finish and much enjoyed overall, keep writing and welcome again!

  • Devilish On Sunday, September 2, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I think i wanna fav you baby. unbelievable poetry darling. this is my second read. i'm in love already. fuck me. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Good writing. Dark and hopeless but thats the kind i love. Keep writing, I look foward to reading more of your work. Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, September 2, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...'it takes 2 to tango'. I like the confessional aspect of this...

  • A former member wrote: Welcome to dp...great work, hope that bastard gets his. Keep up the good work, a bit scary yes but good...keep em coming!!!

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