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Ripped Open and Naked
By spring hews
I laid my
heart out on that dirty table, waiting for you to pierce it with your forked
tongue.
When you did, I was not surprised to find myself weeping tears
that not even time could heal. Pain that would leave a scar so deep that
it tattooed the soul.
Shadows will forever hide the lovers breath
that reeked with romance and possibilities.
You became a murderer
of a once beautiful thing, but you are not the only guilty party, for I
was the one who bared the naked flesh of my throat to be slit.
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Copyright 2012 spring hews
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On Sunday, September 2, 2012, dwells
(4284)
wrote:
Some overworked metaphors early-on but a fine finish and much enjoyed overall, keep writing and welcome again!
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On Sunday, September 2, 2012, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
I think i wanna fav you baby. unbelievable poetry darling. this is my second read. i'm in love already. fuck me.
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A former member wrote:
Good writing. Dark and hopeless but thats the kind i love. Keep writing, I look foward to reading more of your work.
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On Sunday, September 2, 2012, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
...'it takes 2 to tango'. I like the confessional aspect of this...
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A former member wrote:
Welcome to dp...great work, hope that bastard gets his. Keep up the good work, a bit scary yes but good...keep em coming!!!
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