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Dreams
By SalemLex
I can see it now
A vision, premonition or dream
Whatever you want to call it
My mind in a whirl
Confusion among my thoughts
My mind and heart are falling apart
With my mind so occupied its too late
I finally see four bright lights
They shine right on me, two on each side
I see that my heart will be free
I see my last sight
Take a deep breath
The thoughts run out of my mind
The end is so close
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Copyright 2003 SalemLex
Published on Friday, July 25, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Dreams"
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On Thursday, January 8, 2004, Methos
(121)
wrote:
interesting and magnificent work...your poetry knows no bounds, and has neverending depth...Simply wonderful...-Methos
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A former member wrote:
I guess it wouldn't matter if I was in this state of mind, but gettin hit by two cars at once would suck. Talk about a mess.... Anyway, this was cool.
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
i cant believe it.....your not new at this are you, cuz if you are....you is a great begginer...
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, SalemLex
(25) wrote:
no i'm not a beginner, i've been writing for years now but most up here are old ones.
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On Wednesday, August 13, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
just letting you know that your work has depth......urban
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On Friday, July 25, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
a quick retreat into emotion....section #5 row #10 line 15A..............beautiful....urban
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On Friday, August 15, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I', lost too! But i think this is a great piece and u better keep writing!...lol
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, SalemLex
(25) wrote:
Sorry maybe i'm a idiot but whats with the section #5 row #10 line 15A.
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On Friday, July 25, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
What ^^ he said.
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