Dreams

By SalemLex

I can see it now
A vision, premonition or dream
Whatever you want to call it
My mind in a whirl
Confusion among my thoughts
My mind and heart are falling apart
With my mind so occupied its too late
I finally see four bright lights
They shine right on me, two on each side
I see that my heart will be free
I see my last sight
Take a deep breath
The thoughts run out of my mind
The end is so close

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Published on Friday, July 25, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Dreams"

On Thursday, January 8, 2004, Methos (121) wrote:

interesting and magnificent work...your poetry knows no bounds, and has neverending depth...Simply wonderful...-Methos
A former member wrote: I guess it wouldn't matter if I was in this state of mind, but gettin hit by two cars at once would suck. Talk about a mess.... Anyway, this was cool.
On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, Saint_Reaper (200) wrote:

i cant believe it.....your not new at this are you, cuz if you are....you is a great begginer...
On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, SalemLex (25) wrote:

no i'm not a beginner, i've been writing for years now but most up here are old ones.
On Wednesday, August 13, 2003, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

just letting you know that your work has depth......urban
On Friday, July 25, 2003, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

a quick retreat into emotion....section #5 row #10 line 15A..............beautiful....urban
On Friday, August 15, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321) wrote:

I', lost too! But i think this is a great piece and u better keep writing!...lol
On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, SalemLex (25) wrote:

Sorry maybe i'm a idiot but whats with the section #5 row #10 line 15A.
On Friday, July 25, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

What ^^ he said.