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X Rain X
By EMOheart
Dig down deep, and bring the end
Bleed sweet release, my special friend
Bleed out the abuse of your father
You loved him but
he didn’t bother
Bleed out the loss of your mother
For she meant more to you then any other
Whisper to
me with dying breath
Your all alone, but not ready for death
Tears flow freely as you speak words so true
“Im sorry
for this darling, I love you.”
With that you take
your breath
And your taken away by death.
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Copyright 2012 LUNA
Author's Note:
My sweet Rain killed himself last night. He was my fiance and I truely did love him, and still do. I know I am young but this was real. We have beeen together since we were young kids. I wrote this as he took his last breath. He called me to do so...Comments on "X Rain X"
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A former member wrote:
Sick. We're definitely gonna use this one :) -Conner (Bassist)
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On Tuesday, November 13, 2012, EMOheart
(20)
wrote:
send them too me dearest!! i would love to read them... i miss you too!!!!
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On Saturday, July 21, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(429) wrote:
Another traumatic event in your life.... One that no one is prepared to take.... Terrible sorry for what happened.... Please don't go down that way too. If you need something, just DP email me. Just a minor correction, when you say "mant" i believe you want to say "meant"? maybe?
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On Friday, July 27, 2012, EMOheart
(20) wrote:
thank you for your offer... and your correction...
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On Tuesday, April 24, 2012, EMOheart
(20) wrote:
Thank you all for your support and your love... i really need that now. aside from my sister he was all i had...
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On Friday, April 20, 2012, Star
(919) wrote:
R.I.P. Rain as well
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A former member wrote:
R.I.P Rain
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On Friday, April 20, 2012, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Fuck me. damn. DAMN! I mean how the fuck do i comment on this. i just wana reach through the screen and hold you. i'm freaking speechless and breathless. i wrote one for my cousin called his eyes hid suicide. and it killled me to write it and killed me to read it. im sorry but that isnt good enough. i will mail you because my mind is going way to fast . much love.
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