Lourdes
By Corinthian
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straying
angel
slayer
of my child .
an unholy
bible ghost
blessed with
old water and
locked in a hole
lonely and late
scribbling prayers
across my
pale forehead
powdered
tragedy
a
lonely
madonele
I burn.
white
blood
& phantom fluff
blue wax
and baby saint
screaming
whispers
and
fog carols
into your lungs
catch
me
catch me
satan
a lost mother.
charmed
crushed
and broken
walking
through
crucified
flowers
and
angel bones
sleep
swallowing
ashes of prism
unawake
unawake
on
shimmering steeple
dust
alone am I
I am alone
under glass
and lace
*
wearing the
white arms of Mary
In the
+
palace
of Christ
and Vampire
I
want
to
twirl
your
beautiful
hair
around
my
finger
and
never
wake
up
...
again
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Comments on "Lourdes"
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A former member wrote:
Your imagery is so striking... And the paradox of the title. You a cleva neh? Lol, keep up the great writing
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On Thursday, March 29, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
A mother's lament for her lost child perhaps, or something about the sainted one? Not sure but grief and resignation seemed to predominate, cheers.
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On Thursday, March 29, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...your title: the place of miracles...you make breathing pain with your writing...
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On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
My God your amazing.. Every fucking time I read you I get chills and water up.. damn.. you take my breath away.. which is why i need to taste your blood so i can carry you in my veins for life..
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A former member wrote:
What a sonic boom for the senses! I love the gothic imagery. Great write!
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A former member wrote:
Damn this was super intriguing... and very twisted... I love it!