- A Lonely Slumber -
By Phantasmagoria
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My bed is so lonely...
For she only blankets one,
When she is built for two.
Her cold left
side holds nothing more
Than a memory and a stale pillow.
And your scent is ever fading....
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Copyright 2012 Phantasmagoria
Published on Monday, March 5, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
I know its short, I'll probably delete it soon. I just needed to get some unresolved emotions out...Comments on "- A Lonely Slumber -"
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On Saturday, March 17, 2012, Slingnasty
(137) wrote:
For me its ether side of my shadow that is cold and lonely! A great write
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A former member wrote:
no delete quite good :)
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On Saturday, March 17, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Thanks. I wont delete it
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On Sunday, March 11, 2012, haunted
(837) wrote:
you must have been lonely phantasm while you wrote this. does it have anything to do with a bed at all? or is it just your longing to be shared with someone? hmm, i like questions in your poetry that get me thinking. its a beautiful poem and i love your poetry. i ve been feeling really sick so please excuse my tardiness. excellent write!
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On Thursday, March 15, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Ha ha, its okay I've been pretty sick myself, and thanks, I'm so happy that you enjoy my work! :)
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2012, veingo
(526) wrote:
I wrote something very close to this not long ago. I see no need to delete it.. Short, but full of feeling. ^V^
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, darkness falls
(73) wrote:
Yes, the right side of mine is nothing but yesterdays shadows...this hit me hard.
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
chilling.... simple but raw to the point. nice write :)
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A former member wrote:
simpicity makes this short form so excellent. enjoyed your poetry today
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Thank you.
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On Monday, March 5, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Speaks volumes and this left side is her side too, thanks.
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Thanks for commenting.