The Door

By GoldenBlack

The Door

Standing at the foot of this strange door,

Wondering have I been here before,

My heart begins to race,

This must be a magical place,

With excitement I open the door,

The black seeps in consuming the floor,

The rush of fear has now set in,

What did I just begin,

Black is now all that use to be,

Black is now all I can see,

Wondering what could have been,

Wishing for light again,

I see a spot that is bright,

I run to it with delight,

As I peer though this key slot,

I feel the door is getting hot,

I see myself on the other side,

I scream, you need to hide,

I can see the smile on my face,

And the excitement that made my heart race,

Laughter begins to fill my ear.       

Now I feel nothing but fear,

Knowing that I will be back,

Beyond this door into the black!

 

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Copyright 2012 GoldenBlack
Published on Friday, March 2, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This is my second poem enjoy.
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  • A former member wrote: This was reaaally good. Keep writing. Love th flow in it

  • Phantasmagoria On Friday, March 2, 2012, Phantasmagoria (121)By person wrote:

    This is very nice for only being your second poem. I enjoyed the style, welcome to darkpoetry!

  • dwells On Friday, March 2, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Perhaps a preview of thing to come, yes! So very well done and much enjoyed, thanks and welcome to DP.

  • Devilish On Friday, March 2, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Your second poem?.. Wow.. not only a complete difference from the first but totally deep and rythmic.. i'm imoressed you.. so its obvious you have a wide range and definitely worthy of working on.. another welcome to you .. now all you need to do is roam around and read others as it will show activity and help you get to know the community.. dont be shy its a beautiful thing,, if you eva need anything i'm a click away... Scholar

  • Cant walk away On Friday, March 2, 2012, Cant walk away (30)By person wrote:

    pandoras box? Lovely write. Hope to see more from you :)

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