NO MORE
By XOCHITL
come rescue me
from this grasp of doubt and incompleteness
come
find me
wondering in the darkness...
searching for you
grab
my hand
and pull me from this boiling pool of loneliness
for
i have only but a few breaths left
your absence slithers over me
like the soft scales on a snakes belly
sliding and slivering
all over my emptiness
trusting you
is like a hammer
pounding
on my head
consistently knocking
and banging
cracking my
confidence
with doubts of companionship
and self worth
your
slyness rains upon me
in masses and sheets
it soaks me
with huge drops of hurt
and tiny powerful pain filled balls of hail
the silence is deafening to me
the amazement to find
it was
your hand
your hand ...
holding me under the water
my
lungs feeling to explode
and the water is so hot
my skin burns
and bubbles
my screams are muffled...
loud and unheard
i
inhaled deeply
i didn't fight any more
and as peace came across
me
i sank into the darkness
the pain...
no more
Author's Note:
just a release piece......helps clean out my soulComments on "NO MORE"
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A former member wrote:
Really good work, the sudden realisation that it was your lover holding you under, great stuff. Write on.
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A former member wrote:
I love this! the line about only having a few Breaths left is great. I hope this gave you some release. i know my best works come from when i need to get something out.
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A former member wrote:
great write friend!!!!