The world has made you sick
By TyrantAvDetForbannet
The world has made you sick
look at what you have become
you
give up blood,for the bitch
you've been undone
take your own
advice, with a loaded gun
and pull the trigger,into your heart
to show me some love
cant remember now, how it ended this
way
countless memories,drown my senses away
you were right to
put your heart in a cage
i spent years looking for you in the dark
should of known that the rose has thorns
i held you so tightly i
bled
I had to let you go,
for the sake of my well being
and yours.
the candle's light burned out of wick
this world has
made me sick
look at what i have become
i give my blood,for a
muse
it's been done
i should take your advice, with a loaded
gun
and pull the trigger,into your heart
so once again i can
love.
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Copyright 2011 TyrantAvDetForbannet
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On Wednesday, July 11, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Some people are vampires and can't get enough no matter how much we give. Nice to see a thoughtful & creative expression of getting rid of that baggage so you can move on to hopefully more worthy relationships - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
wow, you know, i've never known how much you like to write. Your writing speak volume's. This is a great expression of love and letting go.
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On Saturday, December 10, 2011, AllenTaylor
(39) wrote:
Hell yeah bro! Awesome write!
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On Sunday, June 26, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
HELL FUCKIN YES!!! Oh lovely, please feed me some more... you give up blood for the bitch... and what do we say about that? Drain some blood from that bitch!!!
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
Bleed the bitch!!!
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A former member wrote:
Wow. This was so painfully beautiful..
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
Absolutely, thanks :)
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A former member wrote:
sick and beautiful nicely done :)
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
Thank you , i'm glad you enjoyed!