The world has made you sick

By TyrantAvDetForbannet

The world has made you sick
look at what you have become
you give up blood,for the bitch
you've been undone
take your own advice, with a loaded gun
and pull the trigger,into your heart
to show me some love

cant remember now, how it ended this way
countless memories,drown my senses away
you were right to put your heart in a cage
i spent years looking for you in the  dark
should of known that the rose has thorns
i held you so tightly i bled

I had to let you go,
for the sake of my well being and yours.
the candle's light burned out of wick
this world has made me sick
look at what i have become
i give my blood,for a muse
it's been done
i should take your  advice, with a loaded gun
and pull the trigger,into your heart
so once again i can love.

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Copyright 2011 TyrantAvDetForbannet
Published on Wednesday, June 8, 2011.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Nehema On Wednesday, July 11, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Some people are vampires and can't get enough no matter how much we give. Nice to see a thoughtful & creative expression of getting rid of that baggage so you can move on to hopefully more worthy relationships - XXOO Scholar

  • A former member wrote: wow, you know, i've never known how much you like to write. Your writing speak volume's. This is a great expression of love and letting go. Scholar

  • AllenTaylor On Saturday, December 10, 2011, AllenTaylor (39)By person wrote:

    Hell yeah bro! Awesome write!

  • Devilish On Sunday, June 26, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    HELL FUCKIN YES!!! Oh lovely, please feed me some more... you give up blood for the bitch... and what do we say about that? Drain some blood from that bitch!!! Scholar

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    Bleed the bitch!!!

  • A former member wrote: Wow. This was so painfully beautiful..

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    Absolutely, thanks :)

  • A former member wrote: sick and beautiful nicely done :)

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    Thank you , i'm glad you enjoyed!

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