Bombers party

By alex herewane

it's an lsd party come as you are,
come dirty,  come clean
there's a guy under the table and I ask are you alright
He said I'm happier down here playing with the dead
Two guys are ripping the cupboards from the kitchen walls
One turns to other and says he's not in here, you check the hall
Bomber it's her house and she's as big as a bank
Atlas is in the corner and he looks twice to make sure no one catches him having a wank, Kurt Russell walks in and this women screams, fuck of, you arsehole, your ruining my dream. 
Bomber has euphoria tucked in her smile, eyes half open, eyes half closed
She whispers to Patrica, I'd kill for ice cream
Bones with his long blonde hair, his bent cock and his pet rat 
offers everyone coloured mushrooms sizzling from a pan
A car drives off into the night, into the world, into another dimension
and is never seen again. 
The road that was flat is now quite steep, monsters are lurking up and down the street
punching letter boxes and terrorising every one they meet
And the colours they dance and they laugh, mesmerising patterns on walls and on sheets, my back is hard against the sky, looking back down I see a tear lying on the ground and it makes me feel sad, that tear could be mine. 
 

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Copyright 2011 alex herewane
Published on Saturday, January 22, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I went to this party, a long time ago, these people were actually there you wouldn't want to know all the crazy things they did here is a few
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, July 8, 2011, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    You nailed the random craziness so well...You expressed so well that initial rush and excitement and how it easily can just turn to mad shit.

  • A former member wrote: this is very capturing of a vintage underground...a snippet of history and bygone and deathdefyiing dark character sketches.......a smattering of aerials.. .. . and on today nonetheless.

  • ubiquitoussoul On Tuesday, January 25, 2011, ubiquitoussoul (343)By person wrote:

    sounds about the average day... sick and twisted ..yes..

  • A former member wrote: this is very significant for today I think, not that I've had any experience of this sort... it sounds here like a very thrilling..even spiritual fall.... the exploration of an altered mind, vivid visions..tied with your elevated emotional state.... a glimpse of a world unknown to me. it's wonderful alex, and happy ozzie day!!

  • A former member wrote: yes, australia dae :)

  • A former member wrote: good day for the cricket :)

  • Malcholm Dark On Saturday, January 22, 2011, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    Oh man, this is so funny and so true... a masterful write here my friend... I liked the kurt russell bit, nice... keep writing on the edge, most enjoyable

  • urbanhumility On Saturday, January 22, 2011, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    surreal and lucid at once, dark, well done

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