Angels Don't Kill

Etching little white daisies

with charcoal eyes

Red clouds weeping

the ruin of angels

Her lips,

a hint of autumn paled

Symphony of the night

embrace her whispers

Red clouds bleeding

My eyes are playing tricks on me

How I miss you

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Published on Thursday, November 25, 2010. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Angels Don't Kill"

On Tuesday, December 12, 2017, Cassette (1087) wrote:

I think natalie and honey said it best: this was crushing.
A former member wrote: undone. you always find a way to stun and silence. beauty~
On Thursday, May 26, 2011, Leith Plunkett (237) wrote:

Thanks :) I muchly enjoyed your latest poem, intense
A former member wrote: wow. again, truly stunning and beautifully written.
On Tuesday, December 28, 2010, disposable (103) wrote:

the supposed imagery is interesting and unique. whos view of the world doesnt change when they are alone? nice universal write.
On Friday, November 26, 2010, Corinthian (306) wrote:

This is so sweet and pretty makes me think of soft red velvet blankets and l'adante violins just gorgeous
On Friday, November 26, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343) wrote:

I cant construct how this makes me feel..but it is absolutely beautiful .. the colors and images just imprinted into my mind.. lovely
On Friday, November 26, 2010, alex herewane (149) wrote:

I've been reading and enjoying your work they all have a good feel to them. I wonder whatever happened to my romantic side, keep writing.
On Friday, November 26, 2010, Leith Plunkett (237) wrote:

Thankyou. I find romance very versatile, soft, dark, fatal. With such a powerful emotion you can make it anything you want it to be.
A former member wrote: this was beautiful...its like art, just something to appreciate, look at, and take in. thank you for this art!