On the Occasion of the 30th Anniversary of My Birth

By Crush_With_Eyeliner

I shall
endeavour
to live the
next
thirty years
with the
same facile
wonder
as the last.

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Copyright 2010 Crush_With_Eyeliner
Published on Thursday, November 25, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • jonLyndon On Monday, November 29, 2010, jonLyndon (113)By person wrote:

    I recall my 30th, and the thirties were my best years (46, now). Enjoy it! I like the way you simplified yer thoughts in a small poem. Add a little REM to yer sleep's wishes, w/ eyeliner. I saw REM, once. Great show! I was 30-something! Happy B/REM/Day!!!

  • Crush_With_Eyeliner On Friday, November 26, 2010, Crush_With_Eyeliner (47)By person wrote:

    Hey thanks everyone for the birthday wishes....you should all know, however, that my actual birthday isn't for another week....I was just thinking about it yesterday, while getting my hair cut...I never expected that much grey...oh well...better than being bald..

  • A former member wrote: happy birthday XD nice way of explaining that, clever!

  • ubiquitoussoul On Thursday, November 25, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343)By person wrote:

    Affirmation agreed..Sweet man.. have a sick(not overly) birthday..Awesome devour those years with awesome health!

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, November 25, 2010, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Happy 30th, dude..Really love the sentiment of this piece and the title is wicked.

  • A former member wrote: right on! blow out those candles and make a wish, birthday boy! ;)~ i had a good chuckle last week when my mother sent me a card wishing me a happy 30th..how rude..i'm only 29!

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