F*****

By keltruth7

Did your mummy not love you
were you second best
I'm sure there's excuses you have made for yourself
i'm guessing your void
i looked into your eyes
i saw nothing
and when you spoke those empty words
i gulped them down like a child
not knowing when to stop
i realised you were fucked
right after i left
but i'm not angry with you
i hate myself
because i let you
so what does that make me? 

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Copyright 2010 keltruth7
Published on Monday, November 22, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Saturday, November 25, 2017, Just Dave (448)By person wrote:

    It sucks when people come into your life with such baggage. Nice write. JD

  • A former member wrote: Wow this is good!! I like how you compared yourself to a child and in all a child's innocence, you didn't realize something was wrong.

  • veingo On Thursday, November 25, 2010, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    Ah yes. A place, and feeling I've visited many times. And a question that never goes away.. ^V^

  • Malcholm Dark On Tuesday, November 23, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    an answer to the question... it makes you the smart one... a nice piece here, well written... write on

  • ubiquitoussoul On Tuesday, November 23, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343)By person wrote:

    This feels familiar to someone close.. Thanks for sharing..I may have answered the question..

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