My Room
By CorruptedLittleGirl
Come on in
To a whole other world
Thought up by the mind
Of a very strange girl.
You'll find skulls and masks
As well as teddy bears
There are paintings of death
Look around if you dare.
One of the many focuses
Of this very strage room
Are all kinds of clowns
Who will lead you to your doom!
Clown paintings and posters
And even some masks.
There are pictures of clowns
Doing quite bizarre tasks.
I have a collection
Of many different toys
If you poke them or squeeze them
They'll make an odd noise.
And how about my lamp
Oh how I do love it
'Tis an authentic clown shoe
With a lamp shade above it.
I think it's quite cool
And rather unique
But most people just stare at it
And call me a freak.
My room is just so awesome
It is so very fun
But if I were to tell you everything
I wouldn't be half done!
So now it's time to conclude
I'm sure you're glad that I'm finished
I kind of have to end this poem
My ideas for rhymes have diminished.
~ Everything in this poem is true about my room.
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Comments on "My Room"
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A former member wrote:
what an awesome read. it flows so well. would love to actually see your room
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A former member wrote:
I love this, this is actually very beautiful, I would love that room :)
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A former member wrote:
Just one thing... Clowns! :D
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On Sunday, October 1, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
woot. This one was so fun! And I love the rhyming. Quite easy to read. :)
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, JiNx
(98) wrote:
Awesome.. hmm my room has neon green spider webs on the sealing with black spiders and one really big one with a green back I like my room too! lol -JiNx(ie)
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A former member wrote:
Hey, Sara! Is there room in your room for... ME?! (hehehe) :) ~Shane~
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On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Diva_Satanica
(74) wrote:
your room seems wunderous. everyones favorite place is there room.-D.S
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
I have two phobias: clowns and squirrels *shudders*. I can't seem to bring myself to trust them because they could be thinking absolutely anything behind that surreal, happy façade. I would be pretty freaked out inside your room. Great poem, though. I gue
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
ss it just has horrible connotations for me.
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A former member wrote:
Are you the daughter of Gacy! POGO rules!
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A former member wrote:
Gacy liked clowns....
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On Thursday, June 12, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Gacy was a clown, wasn't he?
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A former member wrote:
lol my room is all painted up with Lydia (from Beetlejuice) but I get much the same reaction. Nice write, and I have to agree that clowns scare me...very much so.
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A former member wrote:
Ever since i was little i have been drawing clowns showing the evil they can be and hanging them in my room, my mom thinks i m insane i should use u as proof i m somewhat normal...somewhat...
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On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Yay! It's great to see that there are more who are like me! :-)
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A former member wrote:
*shudders* Kill all clowns. Still...sounds like a wicked place to be. You described it pretty well..and still made it rhyme.
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On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Why does everyone hate clowns? Clowns are awesome!
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On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
I don't particularly hate them, but can draw up more in my own mind about something dark and sinister about them. Perhaps because they hide behind painted masks. ~ mw
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A former member wrote:
i saw some really really twisted clowns in the album art to a modern rock bands cd... Mr. Bungle i think... and i've been mildly disturbed by them ever since.... sort of a love/fear deal. sounds like a cool room..