My Room

By CorruptedLittleGirl

Come on in
To a whole other world
Thought up by the mind
Of a very strange girl.
You'll find skulls and masks
As well as teddy bears
There are paintings of death
Look around if you dare.
One of the many focuses
Of this very strage room
Are all kinds of clowns
Who will lead you to your doom!
Clown paintings and posters
And even some masks.
There are pictures of clowns
Doing quite bizarre tasks.
I have a collection
Of many different toys
If you poke them or squeeze them
They'll make an odd noise.
And how about my lamp
Oh how I do love it
'Tis an authentic clown shoe
With a lamp shade above it.
I think it's quite cool
And rather unique
But most people just stare at it
And call me a freak.
My room is just so awesome
It is so very fun
But if I were to tell you everything
I wouldn't be half done!
So now it's time to conclude
I'm sure you're glad that I'm finished
I kind of have to end this poem
My ideas for rhymes have diminished.


~ Everything in this poem is true about my room.


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Copyright 2003 Corrupted_Little_Girl
Published on Wednesday, June 11, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: what an awesome read. it flows so well. would love to actually see your room

  • A former member wrote: I love this, this is actually very beautiful, I would love that room :)

  • A former member wrote: Just one thing... Clowns! :D

  • Bluegirl On Sunday, October 1, 2006, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    woot. This one was so fun! And I love the rhyming. Quite easy to read. :)

  • JiNx On Sunday, December 19, 2004, JiNx (98)By person wrote:

    Awesome.. hmm my room has neon green spider webs on the sealing with black spiders and one really big one with a green back I like my room too! lol -JiNx(ie)

  • A former member wrote: Hey, Sara! Is there room in your room for... ME?! (hehehe) :) ~Shane~

  • Diva_Satanica On Thursday, August 14, 2003, Diva_Satanica (74)By person wrote:

    your room seems wunderous. everyones favorite place is there room.-D.S

  • Delphoid-Q On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    I have two phobias: clowns and squirrels *shudders*. I can't seem to bring myself to trust them because they could be thinking absolutely anything behind that surreal, happy façade. I would be pretty freaked out inside your room. Great poem, though. I gue

  • Delphoid-Q On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, Delphoid-Q (213)By person wrote:

    ss it just has horrible connotations for me.

  • A former member wrote: Are you the daughter of Gacy! POGO rules!

  • A former member wrote: Gacy liked clowns....

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Thursday, June 12, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (243)By person wrote:

    Gacy was a clown, wasn't he?

  • A former member wrote: lol my room is all painted up with Lydia (from Beetlejuice) but I get much the same reaction. Nice write, and I have to agree that clowns scare me...very much so.

  • A former member wrote: Ever since i was little i have been drawing clowns showing the evil they can be and hanging them in my room, my mom thinks i m insane i should use u as proof i m somewhat normal...somewhat...

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (243)By person wrote:

    Yay! It's great to see that there are more who are like me! :-)

  • A former member wrote: *shudders* Kill all clowns. Still...sounds like a wicked place to be. You described it pretty well..and still made it rhyme.

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (243)By person wrote:

    Why does everyone hate clowns? Clowns are awesome!

  • manywalks On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    I don't particularly hate them, but can draw up more in my own mind about something dark and sinister about them. Perhaps because they hide behind painted masks. ~ mw

  • A former member wrote: i saw some really really twisted clowns in the album art to a modern rock bands cd... Mr. Bungle i think... and i've been mildly disturbed by them ever since.... sort of a love/fear deal. sounds like a cool room..

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