..color me vividless...

By Spiritus_Frumenti

‘En los lagos de mis dolores,

Encontraras mis oraciones’

 

 

 

Speak to me of your silence,

Of your love, your apathy,

What your heart is feeling

On those long and painful nights

When you begin to believe

It may be best to end your life

 

Draw for me your emptiness,

That cold and distant place you call a soul

That place you frequent,

Where images of me are burning on the walls

While you are buried in the ashes

drowning all alone

 

Write to me about the thoughts

The thoughts you meant to become letters

Letters that would make me miss you

Lines upon lines of how you could never

think of me without crying

That you would never give so much ever again

 

I know, my god, I know

And I am sorry

I am sorry because your heartbreak is mine

And all I could give you is my pain

All I could ask is for your forgiveness…


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Copyright 2010 Spiritus_Frumenti
Published on Monday, September 27, 2010.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Meshell On Tuesday, January 3, 2012, Meshell (34)By person wrote:

    very emotional and heartfelt... im feeling ur words. nice write.

  • DarkDruidess On Wednesday, January 12, 2011, DarkDruidess (313)By person wrote:

    heartfelt and wonderful...*bows*

  • Solace On Thursday, December 23, 2010, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    Reminiscent of "Love in the time of Cholera" this breathes of missed opportunities, of hearts that feel too much - but by comparison make all else seem less pure. To feel at all is a joy, but not without its toll. Beautifully melancholic.

  • Vicious Pixie On Wednesday, September 29, 2010, Vicious Pixie (58)By person wrote:

    Beautifully written. Deep and heartfelt. I liked this

  • urbanhumility On Monday, September 27, 2010, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    well spoken.....friend, well done..................................urban

  • A former member wrote: life and love, such sorry bastards are we, brill write

  • A former member wrote: wow. lovely!! ~ hdb.

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