..color me vividless...
By Spiritus_Frumenti
‘En los lagos de mis dolores,
Encontraras mis oraciones’
Speak to me of your silence,
Of your love, your apathy,
What your heart is feeling
On those long and painful nights
When you begin to believe
It may be best to end your life
Draw for me your emptiness,
That cold and distant place you call a soul
That place you frequent,
Where images of me are burning on the walls
While you are buried in the ashes
drowning all alone
Write to me about the thoughts
The thoughts you meant to become letters
Letters that would make me miss you
Lines upon lines of how you could never
think of me without crying
That you would never give so much ever again
I know, my god, I know
And I am sorry
I am sorry because your heartbreak is mine
And all I could give you is my pain
All I could ask is for your forgiveness…
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Comments on "..color me vividless..."
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On Tuesday, January 3, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
very emotional and heartfelt... im feeling ur words. nice write.
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2011, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
heartfelt and wonderful...*bows*
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On Thursday, December 23, 2010, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Reminiscent of "Love in the time of Cholera" this breathes of missed opportunities, of hearts that feel too much - but by comparison make all else seem less pure. To feel at all is a joy, but not without its toll. Beautifully melancholic.
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On Wednesday, September 29, 2010, Vicious Pixie
(58) wrote:
Beautifully written. Deep and heartfelt. I liked this
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On Monday, September 27, 2010, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
well spoken.....friend, well done..................................urban
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A former member wrote:
life and love, such sorry bastards are we, brill write
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A former member wrote:
wow. lovely!! ~ hdb.