Lost
By Malcholm Dark
She sleeps before me without a sound
I lay my head gently
upon her chest
I close my eyes and listen
I see the life
that was us.
An excitement, a high fevered pitch
A wonderment, a lifetime with you
Enlightenment, the nectar
within
A commitment, the center of life.
Lost in
laughs of happiness
Lost in tears of tenderness
Lost in
ways of the heart
Lost in ways of your soul.
Then
suddenly...
Brutalized by an unknown stranger
Unable to handle
pain and sorrow
Just one night, a sliver in time
All taken
from her, nothing left.
I stood on the outside looking
in
I stood in the wake of banishment
I stood upon emptiness
I stood this broken man.
No more love
No more
hope
No more life
No more, we.
I sit up, you
are as before me
Cold and silent, no more pain...
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
Death by suicide.
She
sleeps before me without a sound
One final kiss, now I sadly move
on.
Comments on "Lost"
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On Saturday, February 8, 2014, BloodyMercy
(64) wrote:
Brutal.... and timeless it seems. I'm glad this popped on the featured - very well written and structured.
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On Tuesday, June 1, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Wow Dark that was quite a powerful write, the sadness a thing of beauty the way you write about it, well done, this one left me speechless.
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A former member wrote:
God......that was wonderful. Sad, but wonderful. If this was a true story I'm glad you were able to move on.
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On Monday, May 31, 2010, Wiccad
(124) wrote:
Geez MD that's a sad one. If this is your reality I shed my tears for you. Emotional.