The new whale. part 2
By Joey
A underwater being rammed and bit into the wooden flesh.
Crewmen on top screamed, unable to know what to do.
what to
conclude, on simply put, what the fuck to do.
This wasn't normal.
for a quick rational thought.
Things like this don't happen.
They all thought this rastional thought.
Ahab
knew better, and for this, he was even worse than ever.
He knew
of violence, and of a rabbit white whale.
Something thought
not possible
But somethings that existance that prevailed
Or of some odd intelligence, to find him for the wound.
That sill had blood pooring, dying his white skin to red.
YOU BEAST, MY LEG YOU RIPPED OFF
TIPPED OF, LEFT A STUMP
LEFT ME BLEEDING ON MY BOAT
FOR NOTHING CAUSE
BUT FISHING FOR SOME GAOT CAUSE
the
ship started to dye, and die. to turn blue, and to sink.
as
it fell slowly into death that seemed to hide its self.
A crew
man fell in, tall, thin, and blacked hair chin.
A scream, a
malsrom of blood, pooured into the top.
Leaving nothing to even
clean. up.
The ship split in half as ahab held his spear.
Pure silver, sharped to a point, it could perice a thousand deer.
A hunters god
He waited still
As the top
half of his ship, came to the water's still
His crew members
fell, and eachone died with a crunch, a crack, or a screaming rasping gasp
water drowned them, or the boat crushed them. the white whale ate them,
its teeth disembowling them.
such horror, such feets, such things
thought impossible
under normal mortal minds and their beats of the
living hearts
The ship was a low V, and sunk slowly deeper.
Ahab waited for the whale, to surface from the sleeping weeping depths.
Aiming low, with a spear of god at his hands.
he waited for the
white, to finally be all red.
A tidal wave rose, into something
of which i told.
LIke a rose, it was beauitful.
Like a rose,
it's thorn's bled deep
The white whale's rise
tred into both
of these deep.
It jumped up, and rose to the top
water
breaking apart
fearing for its own heart
the white/red whale
spead tword the mortal and his god
and was waiting to feed, and it
was periced.
by a spear of a man.
for a man was all he
was
as a man can be killed
and a man can be wrong
and a
man can be broken
even when in his wrought moment of victory.
the silver death, hit the whale, and went throught it's chest.
screaming
it's name, his long lost name.
into it's last dying corress.
but
death it nothing to stop.
a beasts anger, wuch is nothing to
stop.
the former snow white whale, a beauty, a scarcity
continuined
onto its deadly trail
jaws open
teeth of a man, sharp as a sword
twice sharrpend.
plowed and crushed this man, into nothing but one.
Final Morsal.
Comments on "The new whale. part 2"
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On Monday, May 24, 2010, musicalsuicide
(58) wrote:
i love ur dialoge
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Cool imagery, still need to use your spell checker... good emotional content... you need to use a bit more punctuation, especially when someone is speaking... nice piece, write on