"Forever Grand"
By Grim_Sorrow
paint faded
wood worn
ivory keys longing for
a moments embrace
the notes
now empty
don't sing like they
use to
she once made music so beautiful
words so clear
hearts
would melt
minds grew silent
and for a moment
music
that
music
is all that mattered
but now these tunes
false pitch
violent repetition of love and loss
have left us wincing
cringing
wanting to be heard
to be known
understood
chords warped
and frayed
left to befall fate preordained
she stands neglected
unattended
waiting patiently for the chance to sing again.
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Copyright 2010 Grim_Sorrow
Published on Monday, May 3, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
tried something new... seems to workComments on ""Forever Grand""
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A former member wrote:
nice one ... thx for sharin
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A former member wrote:
beautifully bluesy... i felt myself wincing at what it's reduced us to.. broken down song, but that beauty in her voice is not dead...
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On Monday, May 3, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Nicely done... reminds me of my 1880 piano.... so out of tune, it hurts my ears to walk near it... lol.... this piece was a pleasure to read, thanks