Quiet Suffering
By Meadowhawk
Shadows lengthen
darkness slowly drips
onto a silent playground
Where swing seats swirl
in empty circles
pleading
to be remembered
while the carousel
rocks in loneliness
softly squeaking
as if to ask why
The slide has dulled
to corroded gray
it's polished ripples
disused and forgotten
A rusting jungle gym
stings with cold
sadly longing
for
hands to warm it
But there are no
eager hands to hold
no bright eyes
gleam with excitement
Giggles and laughter
have long since faded
along with the summer breeze
Aged
and lonely
she looks upon
a quiet colorless memory
While
a frigid wind bites
at her quivering lips
her tears beg the shadows
to tell
Where have my children gone?
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Copyright 2010 Meadowhawk
Published on Wednesday, April 28, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
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On Friday, February 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
Wow, I'm sorry. That sounds like a lot of suffering. Keep venting with your words.
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On Monday, July 5, 2010, Wiccad
(124) wrote:
Cold metal never tugged at my heart strings before......you give everything such life, sorrow, and beauty. I tip my hat to you sir.
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A former member wrote:
This was amazing, you captivated me and I went flying into your work. Loved it. =)
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Good lord, you my friend are the man... A well written piece of poetry... so sad and yet, so true... I have seen that very scene many times... age and time always wins its' battles... children grow up and move on... such a perfect feeling here within your words... not to be forgotten, thanks
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Good lord, you my friend are the man... A well written piece of poetry... so sad and yet, so true... I have seen that very scene many times... age and time always wins its' battles... children grow up and move on... such a perfect feeling here within your words... not to be forgotten, thanks
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Wow that was heartbreaking, the imagery was spot on, it made me imagine an abandoned playground where happiness was just a vision of the past. Very well done, I'll probably come back to read this again. Thanks for sharing.